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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-05-23 04:08 PM

You are my weakness,
almost as needed
as a glass of lemonade
on a dry tongued day.

When I lack you,
the absence catches me
deficient in smiles,
my moments fading to gray
shadows taking over,
till night makes its way.

You are my want,
filling the void of me,
supplying the energy
that stresses I exist.
When I skimp on you,
I feel so meager
and that is why...

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2002-05-23 04:15 PM

Well I hope I am around to know why.................."supplying the energy
that stresses I exist." Because you sure do with these short verses but oh so well thought out pictures of emotion. So don't skimp because your addiction is inspired!!
Great write Maureen!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2002-05-23 04:19 PM

If you were "my weakness" would this mean anything to you?

thanks E...
hugs
M

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2002-05-23 04:28 PM

indeed. . .

from the heart my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2002-05-23 04:34 PM

Sure would! In many many ways, as many as I could interpret it! To be loved that much is to be fulfilled!!
But Lord as poetry goes you might be talking about your regular cup of tea and that's what makes poetic language so wonderful!

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

5 posted 2002-05-23 04:36 PM

Huzzah wuzzah muzzah? Balla la la? Hee ya?

(ah'm at a loss fr words, M)

-me

She said burn ... together.
-TON

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2002-05-23 04:36 PM

thanks sven..and darn it E..you know how to make a girl....
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smile

M

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2002-05-23 04:38 PM

you squeezed in there "me"...not sure your language agreed with me *s

hugss
M
You are so much fun..I will miss you when you are gone...

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

8 posted 2002-05-23 04:41 PM

Y'd better!

Always a pleasure, M. *bows*

She said burn ... together.
-TON

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

9 posted 2002-05-23 04:50 PM

M ... " ... when I skimp on you, I feel so meager ..." Wonderfully said. Bob

Krissy
Senior Member

since 2002-02-22

Posts 556
kent England

10 posted 2002-05-23 05:17 PM

Maureen this is exquisite writing the words flowing over the page with such ease. The feelings evoked is perfect. Really lovely writing from you

Beautiful form and flow on this one

Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

11 posted 2002-05-24 06:03 AM

Bob... I hate skimping on anything, don't you? thanks *s

Krissy, thank you for your lovely responses..hope Mum is better this morning
hugs to you both
M

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