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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2002-05-20 09:04 PM


dad it is as you said it was
when you read to me
from the good book

when I was little
and my imagination
was small too

there are no words, dad
to tell you how
wonderful it is

to be here now
I can't remember sorrow
or pain or what they mean

don't hurry dad,
but I can't wait to see you
at the door here

so I can show you my new mansion
and thank you dad for telling me
of this place

and helping me know how to get here


©Dark

(with quiet prayers Larry)

© Copyright 2002 ©Dark 2k - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2002-05-20 09:07 PM


Dave

Heart hugs for this tenderness.

Enchantress
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2 posted 2002-05-20 09:37 PM





~Just when you think there are no more tears~

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-05-20 09:53 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh, dearest friend, thank you, thank you, oh I can't stop crying tonight, Larry needs all the hugs he can ever get right now! (sad sigh) You are a true angel, my thoughts are with him too!



Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

rwood
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4 posted 2002-05-20 09:56 PM


powerful to the heart..no words. just hearthugs and love.

Sincerely,
Reg

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2002-05-20 09:59 PM


ms martie thank you ms...hope it helps

enchantress, slow hugs lady friend

noah, thank you gentle one..

regina, tender touches to you babe, thanks for your heart

Midnitesun
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Gaia
6 posted 2002-05-20 10:12 PM


yes, still
You have found some light in the darkness.

my3monkeytoes
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7 posted 2002-05-20 10:15 PM


Dark Stranger~
This is a lovely view of all that's real.

~Sydney McLean

Tracey
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8 posted 2002-05-20 10:16 PM


So gentle, yet so powerful. Beautiful.
Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2002-05-20 10:24 PM


midnite thanks for your read...bless you

my3 monkeyz..thank you so much for the review


Tracey, thanks for your touch..

Sunshine
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10 posted 2002-05-20 10:48 PM



DS, it means a lot that you were able to come in and give your time for Larry.  Thank you!

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (05-21-2002 08:41 AM).]

Greeneyes
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11 posted 2002-05-20 11:12 PM


.....
soft hugs for your heart dear one.....


Lauren~

I would rather have one breath of his hair,
one kiss of his mouth,
one touch of his hand
than an eternity without it.

Bridget Shenachie
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12 posted 2002-05-20 11:15 PM


Beautiful, D. S.  Thank you for sharing this.

Shenachie

ecrivan
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13 posted 2002-05-20 11:20 PM


Dark,

appreciate your perspective on such a sorrowful occasion...Ginger will always be remembered.

Martin


[This message has been edited by ecrivan (05-20-2002 11:21 PM).]

Dark Stranger
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14 posted 2002-05-21 05:57 AM


Ms sunshine..glad to have helped a bit thank you..
Greeneyes, thank you babe

Brigit bless your thoughts

Ecrivan, Thanks for the note here

bsquirrel
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15 posted 2002-05-21 04:18 PM


Beautiful, DS. A hoping poem.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

JamesMichael
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16 posted 2002-05-23 02:48 PM


Soft and tender thoughts..James
PhaerieChild
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17 posted 2002-05-23 07:02 PM


So tender and heart-tugging. What a wonderful way to express love.

There's the man I chose. There's my territory.....Shakira

Magnus
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18 posted 2002-05-23 07:25 PM


Dark,  a very touching and heartfelt write.
I know Larry C. and family will appreciate
your kindness..

Corinne
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19 posted 2002-05-23 08:26 PM


Ahhh, see? There are a world of topics to write on.

Cor

Dark Stranger
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20 posted 2002-05-24 06:45 AM


BSQ, humble thanks amigo

James, thank you my friend

PhaChi, slow hugs lil one thanks

Magnus, thanks sir, I appreciate your thoghts

Cor', but some are so much more enjoyable don't you think?  thanks lady

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