Open Poetry #20 |
Object (Svens Challenge) |
SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Sometimes tall Sometimes short You can feel it Beneath your feet Children playing Running and jumping Doing someraults And rolling in it |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
the green green grass of home.. M |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Ah yes...days of innocence...I love it... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I like it. . . short and to the point. . . well done. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I just love how you describe the beauty of the grass soooooo beautifully in your words, this made me feel like a happy young boy rolling around on the grass again! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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