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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2002-05-23 10:08 AM


Sometimes tall
Sometimes short
You can feel it
Beneath your feet

Children playing
Running and jumping
Doing someraults
And rolling in it

© Copyright 2002 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2002-05-23 10:15 AM


the green green grass of home..

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Startime
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2 posted 2002-05-23 12:02 PM


Ah yes...days of innocence...I love it...
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3 posted 2002-05-23 04:31 PM


I like it. . . short and to the point. . .

well done. . .

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4 posted 2002-05-23 04:43 PM






(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I just love how you describe the beauty of the grass soooooo beautifully in your words, this made me feel like a happy young boy rolling around on the grass again! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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