Open Poetry #20 |
The Pendulum's Trance (Spooky!) |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
As darkness adds to stench and stink from in the pit of pendulum sleek The fall of blade a death foretells as rats upon the ledge do squeak Eyes peer from out the darkest gloom into the black of pit below till pebbles fall o’er sharp of ledge find clinks in swing of glinting slow The swish and flail in rhythm fell from fall in graze of swinging blade when air of steel does breeze the hear in nightmare’s wait of one displayed Whence black of dark and soup of night does bring the blind to terror’s eyes in need of feel of candle’s glow to quell the pierce of screams and cries In pit of dark in times of old as fear of cease does bring a chill a crescent steel of razor cold in swing of night the beat will still |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wow, I think this should go in a classic halloween book. Sandra |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Wow, this is indeed a very haunting yet wonderful poem, sweet friend, I know this kind of nightmare scape well because before I used to live there all the time and could never find the heart to escape! (big hugggsssss) This is powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Barry!! Now you know me and the affect these spooky ones have on me! Now I'm going to be up all night!! I think there is someone under the bed.. AND it's a waterbed! Seriously, you are becoming very proficient with these spooky writes. Good work... ~Extra tight, scared to death hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
ROTF at Enchantress' comment! A waterbed! LOL... Now, note to KRJ: diary 10/31/02, docket one week ahead, send e-mail to Magnus to pull this out of the dusty archives, blow off the cobwebs, and repost for Hallowe'en. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sandra.. As the moon becomes the clouds of darkest night in quaking fear and dread departs flow of shrouds in wait of the pumpkin's leer Sounds like a plan to me... Thanx... Noah....keep a light on tonite!! Nancy...Waterbed? Who is it, the poster boy, still a poster?? LOL KRJ...yes, put it on the docket for one week prior to Halloween... From out of the gloom of dark into the wane of distant light the words will haunt, be stark whence again returns the fright As ground of graves open let the turn of hand gray in chill the boogey man will them get... He's gonna, I'll bet you he will The chill of howl and shriek shall scurry down the soul as bumps will rise and peak when the dead in night do stroll |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*insert evil laugh here* yes. . .I can see this being read in that "Vincent Price" kind of voice. . . well done. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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