Open Poetry #20 |
On Water |
Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
On Water There are puddles: muddy, messy – doomed to quickly vaporize; ponds, where scum-spawned pollywogs surface and life is sticky-sweet; and lakes, where time gathers in slow, purple dreams. Then there are oceans, moody as the moon, amaranthine, wild within her depths. © 2002 Corinne Bailey [This message has been edited by Corinne (05-22-2002 11:11 PM).] |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Corinne Yes there are...almost like some people I know...enjoyed the visuals in this. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Begs the question of whether we are a messy puddle or a deep ocean...I like this Corinne, and I like the presentation, too... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) YAY!!! Yes, may we sail every large ocean and get our hands dirty among the puddles as we play in the spring and summer and walk on water wherever we may go! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Corinne, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
cool refreshing write |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
think I'll write another version on the theme of water, if you don't mind..your poem depicts destiny in a special way. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Such is the cycle of life.. This is 'deep' Corinne... Loved it... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Corinne, An abstract of beauity, enjoyed. |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
A deep beyond all color, beyond all sounding too, the ocean's true alluring, for want of better ....blue. RMW Nicely done, Corrinne. I'm well, thank you. As are you, I trust. Bob |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
oceans, moody as the moon. . . yes. . . this speaks volumes. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
and when I day dream' they are all as glass blown virgin smooth by first time winds enjoyed the views cor' |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, Martie! Sunshine, thank you kindly! Noah, thank you! Wayoutwalt - hey dude, how u be? Ecvrivan - ty! Nan - thank you, Lady! Sey - thank you, sir! Bob - glad to hear you are well! Sven - always so good to hear from you! Dark One - sounds like the sea on a September summer day! Cor |
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