Open Poetry #20 |
Til Shadows Fall |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I wish before the end of time to take you in my roam Within the heart and soul of me in carriage far from home I let the spring of summer’s morn come to the meadow high I gave the lawn this flower bloom in moments of the sigh. Into the wait of yearn in heart where rubies polished gleam at sound of open gate remain in flow of summer’s stream Where blossoms fall as white of snow into the arms of green and lover’s laugh in stride of joy when shining eyes then sheen Till moon in full does bring to dawn and wake the morning sun shadows then fall in climb of light as two hearts beat as one [This message has been edited by Magnus (05-22-2002 09:08 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
beautiful, but I live in the shadows, Barry so I would love this. *s M |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
M. Shadows are many things... Our past... Our sanctuary.... Our inner self where only we go... places or persons who remain over us... So many variations.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Where blossoms fall as white of snow into the arms of green and lover’s laugh in stride of joy when shining eyes then gleam ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Mmmm, *sigh*...love this Barry! Sure do! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Oh Barry, this is wonderful, sweet friend, just the thought of meadows as white as snow in spring made me sigh happily! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
as calming and cool as summer breeze on a freshly wetted and clean skin standing there, drinking it in, and enjoying it all tSR |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Striking imagery. The purr on the tigerlily! ThisDiamond |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Behind the garden wall I hide 'neath ivy twine's embrace till the step of you shall come and I shall see your face thus the fresh of garden's scent fills the air with glee till the breath of you shall come into the heart of me... [This message has been edited by Sunshine (05-22-2002 10:11 PM).] |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
wonderful my friend, and let's hear it for shadows...not to hide in, but from which to see... jwesley |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry. You wear romance, and it fits so beautifully! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and you know the shadows like this one very much! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh Barry, this is so beautiful. I really like this. |
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