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In The Becoming |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Seep swiftly from this heart the purest insurrection Parting by the hand and sword in humblest reflection Dim the bulb of ignorance replaced by striking light Become the angel infamous to claim the force of night Sweep in and out the corridors of endless tears Perished in the mighty surf to places wise of years Dumb the stricken wailing in its yearning to be heard Become the equidistant guardian as providence allured Seep swiftly from this heart the aching unabated Purged before the healing hand in pain incinerated Dawn within the needing, a companion edged in gold Become the chariot master a relationship quite bold Copyright Kkh 5/22/02 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Become the chariot master, a relationship quite bold! Ride the hooves of steeds in pull Ride the winds of sails in full Ride the wings of souls in flight Ride the chariot, til morn's light... Beautiful Poem Kathy....thank you.. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
See the steed of white give break the flaming chariot to pull See the lady in whitest lace she is the warrior's goal TD - this is beautiful, and you are giving vast amounts of inspire.... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Great me friend and ended perfectly...really enjoyed the read. jwesley |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
What a wonderful piece I chose for my last read of the day! Excellent Kathleen! Absolutely loved it. ~Nite, Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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TriXter Member
since 2002-03-20
Posts 112The One |
I enjoyed this The man of few words... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
ThisDiamond Fabulous!..you are becoming a must read for me. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssss) Oh Kathleen, this is sooooo wonderfully drawn, sweet friend, may we all take cruise control and lead chariots of grace into the paths that lie ahead! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Wow... This was so like a sonnet "in the becoming" and yet it is wonderful as is.. What a feast of word! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Such a great array of wonderful word pictures.....very nice write! I really like the sound/read of this... "Dim the bulb of ignorance replaced by striking light Become the angel infamous to claim the force of night" Clear to me now! |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I really like this. The flow was perfect, and the rhyming scheme was the best! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Thank you everyone...I humbly bow to your inspiration and astonishing thought waves! ThisDiamond |
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