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a song for her..
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a song for her.. |
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TriXter Member
since 2002-03-20
Posts 112The One |
I started lovin you a few years ago but you have no idea of the love i know who knows where this life will oventually take us when u cry i frown and i start to cuss i see a tear and my heart starts to break i break down, i feel that I could fill a great lake I know i always want you by my side hoping that our differences dont collide and hope that one day you might be mine Course: I need a girl I can hold all night I need a girl who can make dark light I need a girl who can make me smile I need a girl who makes me go wile i need a girl who can let me love I need a girl who was sent from above I need a girl with them baby blue I need a girl who is perefect, i need you (end course) I had a girl that would die for me I once had a girl that would smile for me she loves to laugh and shed laugh for me on a bad day she would cuddle with me everyday shed have tears in her eyes for me I made her frown so her heart broke for me but now with these tears in my eyes I cry for me (course) alone, now ill forever cry alone on my bed with a crying sigh i want you bad but its what life has to do i wanna be one of those guys, i wanna be in that few that ever get to be around and who you kiss my sarane',i will sing you this and if you leave youll be the one i'll forever miss the only one thats ever made me cry the thought of not having you and i dare not lie I just want you in my life so dont ignore and drown out this and let me know with youre tender kiss (course) The man of few words... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Interesting concept and some nice leading lines in this one! |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
TriXter, love hurts coming and going. Is in-be-tween a safe place? Enjoyed, ME |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssssss) I know just how you feel, sweet friend, my heart goes out to your heart, for I too yearn ever so much of being with the girl I love, Joanna, and making her the happiest girl she can be, an I hope of meeting her this summer! (sigh)Believe in your heart always and I know all your dreams will come true, sweet friend, I wish this great happiness for you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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