Open Poetry #20 |
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Remember it's ok to say no |
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since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
"Remember it's ok to say no" © 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved Verse 1: Fifteen year old girl, home alone with a boy. They start kissing, she think it's wonderfull, But suddenly, he wants to do alot more. And she starts to get uncomfortable. Slowly she begins to cry. No, no, no, no. She push him away,you better go... Chorus: Remember, it's ok to say no. (It's ok to say no) (4x) Verse 2: Jason joins a gang, a whole new family. everything's going fiine, get's his share of respect. Untill one day, that they (moc) an old lady. Crime's not the way, "I want out" he said. Think to himself "this is wrong. No, no, no, no. So just let them be, I better go" Chorus: Remember, it's ok to say no. (it's ok to say no) (4x) Bridge: Don't let nobody get you down. Don't let nobody push you around. You decide what you wanna do. Not them, not her, not him, you...Only you Don't do thing's you know is wrong. It's ok to say no, no, no, no, no... Verse 3: Sarah's on her way, to be a movie star. Everywhere she go she is givin fine rewieves. One day a man, tell her that she's perfect. To star in his low buchet film "Huge". She reads the script, no way. No, no, no, no. I'm not doing this, I better go. Chorus: Remember, it's ok to say no. (it's ok to say no) (Till fade) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A bit of spell check and I think you've penned a song... liked the theme! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Not only ok but at times necessary...James |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Our bodies and minds belong to us...not to others...and we must have this freedom of expression and speech... I agree with the spellcheck..... You have written a very good thought. So many are fearful to just say the NO word.. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() BRAVO!!! Oh Brian, this is wonderful, sweet friend, yes, yes, may we always follow our hearts and do what we feel is right and resist what is impure to our nature! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brian, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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