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A Grand Plan
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A Grand Plan |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin 
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In this book we call life we so often think chapters ahead study chapters behind, wondering what could've made todays reading more interesting what can we do, hopefully tomorrows will be more more along the lines of what we would've liked for today, work on that... lets think of how we want what we want and what we need to do to get it. make a plan work towards it the more we work and plan today the better tomorrow will be dont waste any time the more you ponder it the farther away it becomes just go get it someday tomorrow will hold the key to happiness how could it not? all the yesterdays studying working it looks so bright ahead now that I know what is planned for the next chapter happy just thinking about it I've got it all figured out it's written right here see my whole plan tried and trued by history I've see its all right here in my planner I'm still thinking about all the big plans I have so many I dont know where to start but I hope the wait goes by fast 'cause I'm so excited... I gave up today and yesterday for it but I feel good I know what tomorrow will bring believe me I s p e n t m y w h o l e l i f e p l a n n i n g. Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Hi. I enjoyed the read. So, it's all planned? No room for dramatic exciting surprise adventures? I like the way the flow of the poem pushes you, as if the fast forward button is stuck. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I like how you go full circle with the idea of planning and the time that can pass by so easily! |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
thank you both for your imput  The last line is the kicker, didnt know if people would pick up on it or not... Meaning is dont spend your whole life planning for something that may never come, enjoy today, what happens if I live my life like that and die a year before the big plan begins? I lived my whole life in vain.Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. [This message has been edited by ThUnDeRkYsS (05-22-2002 10:00 PM).] |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
I loved this one... You are so right; you can't spend your life planning your life because it will pass you by in the process. Very nicely expressed here. *hugs&...*  Jessica |
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