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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2002-05-22 06:06 AM


do you like the scent of dark leather
when it is wicked fresh
and presses to the seams
of white like night to day

when it spoils and soils
indiscreetly and makes visible
the under edges of pure
then colors them scarlet

do you feel the temptation
of perhaps we can be bad
and love the residue of sin
that drips from our tarnish

do the eyes of wolf soot seduce you
til your garment's shimmer
is far less to the mind
then the morning panting howls?

does your caution gray in my whiteless shadows?

©Dark


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-05-22 06:23 AM



Just what is it about
a wolf that makes them
so very fascinating?

Enjoyed the nature walk...

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2002-05-22 06:40 AM


morning ms sunshine, thank you for your whisper....I think it is their eyes..perhaps?


Sunshine
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3 posted 2002-05-22 07:00 AM



The eyes, perhaps...

Wolf soul sounds
deep rumbling
carrying across Nations
Keeper of Stories

Lone howl cries
searching lost mate
full moon wanes
over time

visions in a
wolf's eyes...

ethome
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4 posted 2002-05-22 07:27 AM


They truly are fascinating and so is this write!
Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2002-05-22 07:48 AM


ms sunshine, thank you again and your wolves are stunning under pen

ethome, humble thanks for the read and comments

rwood
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6 posted 2002-05-22 07:48 AM


Yes..I'll say fascinating is a great word to describe the primal shadows that lurk somewhere between want and willing and those trees..That sublime forest of temptation.

You are just too dark..wink*

Reg

Kethry
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7 posted 2002-05-22 08:14 AM


Dark stranger,
you have an adept way of merging mystery with mundane, although there's nothing mundane about this piece.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2002-05-22 08:17 AM


regina...thank you for your reads..come along if you wish...but hang on tight.

kethry, thank you lady friend for your reads and comments

Mistletoe Angel
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9 posted 2002-05-22 08:20 AM




(sigh) Oh my gosh, this reminded me of that popular phrase, "Did you ever have that feeling like you're being watched?". (smiles) A great sense of mysterious passion fills these words, sweet friend, I love it, I just love the contrast you bring colors in your words, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2002-05-22 08:26 AM


Dark Stranger
Only in a philosophical way, enjoyed.

Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2002-05-22 09:58 AM


noah, thanks my friend

sy, much respect to your reviews sir  thanks

Martie
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12 posted 2002-05-22 10:05 AM


DS

Contradictions are very alluring, like good and bad...a white mountain looks most intriguing with a dark tree growing on it.  Your poetry is often like this.

"do you like the scent of dark leather
when it is wicked fresh
and presses to the seams
of white like night to day"

Yes.


Enchantress
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13 posted 2002-05-22 11:18 AM


Dark~In answer to your question....Yes.
~Morning Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Dark Stranger
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14 posted 2002-05-22 11:37 AM


ms martie, thank you babe for the touch and
thoughts.

enchantress, thank you sweet lady, for your eyes and sighs

bsquirrel
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15 posted 2002-05-22 02:18 PM


Always enjoy...

She said burn ... together.
-TON

PhaerieChild
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16 posted 2002-05-22 03:15 PM


I love your word forests. So dark and exciting.

There's the man I chose. There's my territory.....Shakira

Corinne
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17 posted 2002-05-22 04:58 PM


whiteless shadows = dark shadows?

Cor

Dark Stranger
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18 posted 2002-05-22 05:12 PM


BSQ, thanks amigo, you are appreciated

PhaChi, have missed you..you must be vacationing now...thanks sweet lady

Cor' yep...don't be afraid..I am not cereal or serial either..thanks lady

PhaerieChild
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19 posted 2002-05-22 06:14 PM


DS just got back last night. I sure missed your musings.

There's the man I chose. There's my territory.....Shakira

nakdthoughts
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20 posted 2002-05-22 07:02 PM


you bring me to a place in my mind that I often keep hidden.. I have always enjoyed your rides.

*s
M

Magnus
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21 posted 2002-05-22 07:11 PM


Dark....you have a powerful way with words
and metaphors....impressive...

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