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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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do you like the scent of dark leather when it is wicked fresh and presses to the seams of white like night to day when it spoils and soils indiscreetly and makes visible the under edges of pure then colors them scarlet do you feel the temptation of perhaps we can be bad and love the residue of sin that drips from our tarnish do the eyes of wolf soot seduce you til your garment's shimmer is far less to the mind then the morning panting howls? does your caution gray in my whiteless shadows? ©Dark |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Just what is it about a wolf that makes them so very fascinating? Enjoyed the nature walk... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
morning ms sunshine, thank you for your whisper....I think it is their eyes..perhaps? |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The eyes, perhaps... Wolf soul sounds deep rumbling carrying across Nations Keeper of Stories Lone howl cries searching lost mate full moon wanes over time visions in a wolf's eyes... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
They truly are fascinating and so is this write! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sunshine, thank you again and your wolves are stunning under pen ethome, humble thanks for the read and comments |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Yes..I'll say fascinating is a great word to describe the primal shadows that lurk somewhere between want and willing and those trees..That sublime forest of temptation. You are just too dark..wink* Reg |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Dark stranger, you have an adept way of merging mystery with mundane, although there's nothing mundane about this piece. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
regina...thank you for your reads..come along if you wish...but hang on tight. kethry, thank you lady friend for your reads and comments |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Oh my gosh, this reminded me of that popular phrase, "Did you ever have that feeling like you're being watched?". (smiles) A great sense of mysterious passion fills these words, sweet friend, I love it, I just love the contrast you bring colors in your words, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger Only in a philosophical way, enjoyed. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
noah, thanks my friend sy, much respect to your reviews sir thanks |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS Contradictions are very alluring, like good and bad...a white mountain looks most intriguing with a dark tree growing on it. Your poetry is often like this. "do you like the scent of dark leather when it is wicked fresh and presses to the seams of white like night to day" Yes. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dark~In answer to your question....Yes. ~Morning Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie, thank you babe for the touch and thoughts. enchantress, thank you sweet lady, for your eyes and sighs |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Always enjoy... She said burn ... together. |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
I love your word forests. So dark and exciting. There's the man I chose. There's my territory.....Shakira |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
whiteless shadows = dark shadows? Cor |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
BSQ, thanks amigo, you are appreciated PhaChi, have missed you..you must be vacationing now...thanks sweet lady Cor' yep...don't be afraid..I am not cereal or serial either..thanks lady |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
DS just got back last night. I sure missed your musings. There's the man I chose. There's my territory.....Shakira |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you bring me to a place in my mind that I often keep hidden.. I have always enjoyed your rides. *s M |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Dark....you have a powerful way with words and metaphors....impressive... |
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