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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2002-05-21 11:21 PM



Courage more than just bravado, worldliness, sophistication
Risk to dream; to reach and fail, fall far of mere articulation
Caverns that can swallow up the human heart if only dared
Courage: strength to reach across a mile wide chasm shared

Risk to open; in the shed of mask and husk and simply be
Care enough to take the action of the inner message faithfully
Courage works below the gums into the core of meager man
Risk the aching and confusion as a warrior; as by love we can

Care to hold on tight, and then let go, remain in close connection
Courage lives in faith, creative powers sibilant and resurrection
Risk to give the upper hand away entrust the instinct as inborn
Courage thrives when less is more; healing touches suture scorn

Content; the creative stream residing in the wishes that are granted
Risk to win or lose, within the wheel; upon a path of light enchanted
Courage to forgo the quick for worthy joy into the boil of the sea
Caverns deeper shelters, unlike fearful places once portrayed to be

Copyright Kkh 5/21/02

© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-05-21 11:38 PM


ThisDiamond

What a wonderfully uplifting and powerful poem.  Your rhythm is perfet in flow and rhyme caught me into it's go.  Very well done and wisdom laced.

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2 posted 2002-05-21 11:43 PM




BRAVO!!! Yes, everyday is a walk to the end of all of lifes tunnels and all it takes is courage to follow our dreams and find happiness and solace even when it may seem impassable to our eyes! (kiss on cheek) This is very well-said, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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3 posted 2002-05-22 12:13 PM


"Risk to dream; to reach and fail, fall far of mere articulation"

I really like the whole poem, but that one line stood out. Very well done, with good messages.

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4 posted 2002-05-22 12:41 PM


Risk to open; in the shed of mask and husk and simply be
Care enough to take the action of the inner message faithfully

So many great lines in this I could have quoted the whole thing.  Amazing depth.

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5 posted 2002-05-22 03:14 PM


Encore! Encore!

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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6 posted 2002-05-22 06:35 PM


Awesome, Kathy!

What our caverns can be if only we have
the courage to allow it...a very strong
and positive message...love the cadence
and flow of your words...

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