Open Poetry #20 |
Courage And Caverns |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Courage more than just bravado, worldliness, sophistication Risk to dream; to reach and fail, fall far of mere articulation Caverns that can swallow up the human heart if only dared Courage: strength to reach across a mile wide chasm shared Risk to open; in the shed of mask and husk and simply be Care enough to take the action of the inner message faithfully Courage works below the gums into the core of meager man Risk the aching and confusion as a warrior; as by love we can Care to hold on tight, and then let go, remain in close connection Courage lives in faith, creative powers sibilant and resurrection Risk to give the upper hand away entrust the instinct as inborn Courage thrives when less is more; healing touches suture scorn Content; the creative stream residing in the wishes that are granted Risk to win or lose, within the wheel; upon a path of light enchanted Courage to forgo the quick for worthy joy into the boil of the sea Caverns deeper shelters, unlike fearful places once portrayed to be Copyright Kkh 5/21/02 |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
ThisDiamond What a wonderfully uplifting and powerful poem. Your rhythm is perfet in flow and rhyme caught me into it's go. Very well done and wisdom laced. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
BRAVO!!! Yes, everyday is a walk to the end of all of lifes tunnels and all it takes is courage to follow our dreams and find happiness and solace even when it may seem impassable to our eyes! (kiss on cheek) This is very well-said, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Risk to dream; to reach and fail, fall far of mere articulation" I really like the whole poem, but that one line stood out. Very well done, with good messages. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Risk to open; in the shed of mask and husk and simply be Care enough to take the action of the inner message faithfully So many great lines in this I could have quoted the whole thing. Amazing depth. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Encore! Encore! She said burn ... together. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Awesome, Kathy! What our caverns can be if only we have the courage to allow it...a very strong and positive message...love the cadence and flow of your words... |
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