Open Poetry #20 |
For A Moment - Dedicated to all of Sun's Passionate Poets... |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
For a moment Might one take but a moment brief to think of one, and bring relief worrisome matters, they should fade when cast upon, by eyes of jade To think of one, to bring a smile worrisome matters, then gone awhile when cast upon, by eyes of blue this is then what you can do Worrisome matters, tears to hide when cast upon, by eyes of brown this is then what goes around when a circle is formed oh so wide When cast upon, by eyes of the world this is what shall be, all sails unfurled when a circle of hands reach out for you and lift you up, these moments through So for a moment, for a moment brief breathe a soft deep sigh of relief so that worrisome matters may fall behind when caught up in our circles kind ~*~ Dedicated to all of Passions Passionate Poets That care for one another |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karilea...from one who cares to the Queen of compassion and caring.... Thank You ever so much for a beautiful thought and a most beautiful poem... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea This kind of circle is made of pure gold, as is your heart, sweet friend. |
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EternitysHorizon Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 145Twilight's Orchestra |
A lovely write that encompasses what I have seen in so much compassion at this place. You describe it well in this verse. Merci Eternity |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
So for a moment, for a moment brief breathe a soft deep sigh of relief so that worrisome matters may fall behind when caught up in our circles kind ================================= "may the circle be unbroken" "Ive been down this road forever and the time has come to circle back home." Tom Kimmel love this intention dear poetess K |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I am so lucky also to be surrounded by you and so many caring and compassionate friends, sweet friend, I used to think I would never ever be loved, now I have been proven wrong! (sigh) You are a delight to us all, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
This is indeed a wide friendship circle we have formed over this "cyber" space and into the real world, sharing cares, prayers tears, fears. Rare hearts united against the cold night. Thank you Karlea, you have said it well and with such kindness. Love, Light and Peace, Sherry Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Karilea Your words were so very moving and so heartfelt. I have always felt that if my words can help or touch the hearts of others then that makes it so worthwhile for me and I'm sure many other agree with your lovely words. It's amazing how much power can be found within the written word. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thank you. We have a great circle here, one that encompasses so many giving hearts and minds. It's the biggest Love circle I've ever been inside. |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Beautiful poem, our dear caring Karilea! Thank you for writing it. Shenachie |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karilea, I pray this circle of friendship here at Passions is never ever broken. Many personal bonds of love and trust have been made here in the pages of blue. Beautiful write. ~Heart-hugs~ Nancy |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
So many people here have been helped or have had their burdens lightened by the comapssion and understanding of others...you say it well, Sunshine |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thank you for sharing this lovely poem, Karilea..we are really a family in the truest sense of the word. To me...family is more about caring than about blood...and I know that we all have found a lot of caring here...due in no small part to yourself. ~ hugs from a sister Lyra |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Said so well by someone who's always one of the very first to hold out hand and heart to help. *S* Beautiful, Sunshiney one. *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, A soft and lovely message, enjoyed. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari darling sister of my heart, this is utterly utterly delightful. Really lovely circle of friendship, so often when the world seems too big a place I look for you a smiling happy face. Wonderful writing, as always you delight when you write, and when you write with friendship you shine even brighter than normal You know I utterly utterly love this one Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is a ray of sunshine, Sandra |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
One heartfelt dedication and an equally heartfelt poem - You're an endless ray of Sunshine, ya know??.. |
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