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wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2002-05-19 11:39 PM


I met a girl named Hope
I met a girl named Grace
I met a girl named Charity
They all spit in my face

I met a girl named April
I met a girl named May
But neither of those pretty girls
Would gimme the time of day

I met a girl named Chandler
And also one named Taylor
Both of them were men you see
And also dirty sailors

I met a girl named Chastity
And darn if that was right!
I met a girl named Harley D.
And we rode it both all night

I met a girl named Opal
and boy was she a jewel
Then I met this Ruby girl
But diamonds were her rule

I met a girl named Daisy
Rose was an awesome chick
Both smelled so good to me
I didn’t know which one to pick

I met a girl named Winter
I met a girl named Spring
But Summer was the hottest babe
She could wear bout anything

I met a girl named Elizabeth
I met a girl named Sue
But of all the girls on this green earth
I’m glad I met sweet you

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (05-19-2002 11:41 PM).]

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Helea
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1 posted 2002-05-19 11:41 PM


So sweet!!!!
my3monkeytoes
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2 posted 2002-05-20 12:06 PM


What about Gertrude and Hildagard?     I loved this write!  Very light and just plain funny!

~Sydney Mclean

bsquirrel
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3 posted 2002-05-20 12:19 PM


You've done it again, walt. And now I've gone and stepped in it.

Loved this.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

DawnG
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4 posted 2002-05-20 12:29 PM


Walt,

Thank you for a bit of fun tonight as all our hearts are heavy. This is really cute.

                            Dawn

wayoutwalt
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5 posted 2002-05-20 12:31 PM


I didn't know about Larry's loss when posting this but I am sure he wouldn't want anything to change at the site on his account    thanks to you all
Duncan
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6 posted 2002-05-20 12:34 PM


Girls...aren't they great!
wayoutwalt
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7 posted 2002-05-20 12:35 PM


just the sound of the word....girl
Kethry
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8 posted 2002-05-21 09:31 AM


My daughter's name is April Walt, and she says the time is 11.42pm
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Sunshine
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9 posted 2002-05-21 09:38 AM



Larry will enjoy the humor down the road...

Christopher
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10 posted 2002-05-21 01:04 PM


ROFL!!!
quote:
I met a girl named Daisy
Rose was an awesome chick
Both smelled so good to me
I didn’t know which one to pick
wonderful smashing of cliche through metaphor. very well done walt

Chris

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11 posted 2002-05-21 02:07 PM


walt...
this was hillarious...and such with
such wit...thank you for the uplifting
read today
take care.
amy

"you can't stop
the rain
from pouring down
can't stop the
world from turning 'round
can't stop me from
loving you
no matter
what you do"

Pilgrimage
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12 posted 2002-05-21 04:12 PM


Ha! This is one of your best. I loved it.

Nan

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13 posted 2002-05-23 11:02 PM


Very cute walty... elisa loves it, yes?
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