Open Poetry #20 |
Love Me....As I Love You |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sands of time in flow of glass through hearts of love in moments pass Beyond the walk of life and light of visions in the stars of night Two walk alone into the dream of flowing falls and crystal stream to share one kiss for all of time a mome’ of bliss serene, sublime Taken to be of one chance two into the walk of sky in hue To live and laugh and whisper tell beyond the light of crack in bell To give what gave and give yet more as love in life dances the floor A whisk and swish and twirl delight for lasting mem’ry of one night Listen to a sigh caress the ear Listen well darling, precious dear Love me ever, as I do you Love me ever, ever so true. |
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msflame Member
since 2002-05-21
Posts 188 |
would you mind terribly if I printed this out? |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Msflame...not at all, be my guest... Thank You!! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling heart and keeper of dreams guises, this is spectacular writing. The type of writing that takes you into the very heart of it and holds you captured and spell bound until the last word. Writing such as this is too fine, too rare to be tossed aside carelessly, or read too quickly in haste. Writing such as this must be allowed to sink into the soul of the reader and settle like a mantle over the spirit. Imparting wisdom, sharpening the senses and giving the soul such wonder, such thoughts, that they inspire, and stir that place within. Okay this isn’t a novel so I’ll finish rhapsodising, and simply say this has been written with pure skill, and yes I utterly utterly love it. Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Mushy, you are gonna make my head swell up SO big, I won't be able to get out of this room tonite and go to bed.....OH well, guess I will just have to sit and continue writing poetry.... Thank You Darling Girl... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry So romantic, and sighable..(made up new word) |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
To give what gave and give yet more as love in life dances the floor A whisk and swish and twirl delight for lasting mem’ry of one night I love the way you use the words here, Barry....its also a beautiful, romantic poem. ~lots of hugs Lyra |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Martie....I kinda like that new word... Please continue to use it... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Good evening Lady Lyra, yes, I do enjoy twisting the words around a little bit, seems to make the cadence work better for me in some lines.... Thanx, hugs and hope you are well.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Barry...I think Martie said it best...'sighable'....YES!! Good word!! This write produces huge sighs from this Canadian gal! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Well Nancy....now you two ladies have a word you can share... You two sighable girls... Thanx...hugs again...(how many now?) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I see that one of our new members knows just how to go about collecting some good poetry... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yep, she does....I bribed her into doing it. Now I am going to have to crank up the poetry machine and crank out some more poems for her to collect....Wonder if she knows how to do a search and read archived posts? Oh Msflame.....are you there?????? |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(giggles) Now I'll coin a phrase of my own, you are a true "sigh"amatic of these pages! (big hugggssssss) This is soooooo lovely, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Noah...now that is a new variation of the word *Sigh*....guess we can add it to the collection...Think it will make Websters? |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Barry, Another peak achieved. Really beautiful flow to this. The ending was great...and the beginning...and the middle. ThisDiamond |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
Magnus, you've got a hundred sighs from me! This is so beautiful |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Kathy, seems like you just told me that you liked this...in all it's parts... I am very pleased...I enjoy sharing and giving others some pleasure from my poetry. ThankYou very much! Chelsea....Gosh, I thought Nancy (Enchantress) had the record for sighs... I think you just passed her.... Thank You! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing Magnus...James |
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