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Open Poetry #20

This Brilliant Night

kinson
Member

since 2002-05-13

Posts 66
somewhere between here and there

0 posted 2002-05-21 07:11 PM

Under this dark sky
I wonder if your looking too
The moon is full
Just like my heart
Now that i have you
This endless quest is ended now
Despite others deciet
No longer will I search
For in you I feel complete
Angel of redemption
Stumbled into me
In your eyes are the answers
My future yet to be
As I watch the sun rise
Wonder if your looking too
The sun is brilliant like my heart
Now that I have you

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

1 posted 2002-05-21 07:45 PM

Hello kinson

This is the first piece I have read of yours and I certainly wasn't disappointed. Your words were filled with an honest love and deep devotion for someone very special. You painted a beautiful picture with your words and I'll look forward to reading more.

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

kinson
Member

since 2002-05-13

Posts 66
somewhere between here and there

2 posted 2002-05-21 07:53 PM

thank you sue, im very glad you enjoyed it

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2002-05-22 09:29 AM

I love the title of this... it captures so well the heightened senses we have when our heart is happy. *S* Nice writing, kinson... I enjoyed.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2002-05-22 09:33 AM

kinson
Well done, enjoyed.

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