Open Poetry #20 |
Lousy Poetic Waxing |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lousy Poetic Waxing ~*Marge Tindal*~ She said, "Just once could you write something lousy ?" /pip/Forum69/HTML/000129.html#18 I laughed right out loud .... for lousy is something that I know won't make me very proud~ But, I'm here to do requests for friends who ask with glee Now here's a lousy verse not waxed so poetically~ Inside-out there is a place where outside-in won't do but if I make it rhyme just right I'll bet I can fool even you~ You may laugh behind my back and slather your reply with praising glee but, you know that I will know you're lying through your keys~ Right up front, I'll confess this one is pretty lame but ... it's a L'Oreal Blonde day in Florida and it's even begun to rain~ *Okay, my Marti friend - Miss NewEnglandlazurlu How about it ??? Is this one lousy enough for you ? ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Marge, I am really pleased that you write such beautifully lousy poetry.... HA!... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ Awwwww ! Now why do I get the distinct impression you could talk an Eskimo into purchasing ice cubes ? *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Marge, Is that anything like bikini waxing? I'm afraid to look. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Larry~ Ohhhhh, go ahead and LOOK ! Your suggestion is even funnier than my entire lousy rhyme~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I've been waning a long time for a piece of lousy poetry from you... Still waning.. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nanners~ LOL ... only you would think up 'waning' ... only you ! Good Gawd Girlie ... how much worse could it get ?????? *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--It's just not in you...so give up!! and |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Oh my Lordy, I'm pee'ing my panties laughing. This is THE best and most brilliant 'lousy' poem I have ever had the honor of reading. Girlfriend, you just hang onto that sense of humor and never let it go! I love ya....Marti " My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother." |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: This is definitely not up to your usual standard! However I do believe it has established a standard of it's own! Maybe it could be called "the best of the worst!". Betty Lou Hebert |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
He he Good fun Marge as you can do so well! You can even make lousy good! I was wonderfing when I started the read if you might start on a verse about your flea infested cat or something like that!! Have a nice day....you're precious!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Nope, can't do it. You failed at writing lousy... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Thanks for the smile Sandra |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'm convinced, through and through There's just one thing you cannot do: You can't deny your gift with word! Though you might create some absurd Attempt to write at less than best... Forget it, Marge... you failed this test! LOL... Hon, if you want to post a lousy poem, just let me know... I have boxes full of the things! LOL |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Only got one answer to this. |
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