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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2002-05-21 08:47 AM



I have walked from castles,
tossing diamonds in the moat...
I can walk away from you
you should not place a bet I won't.


You are a king of arrogance
in gloat upon your throne.
But I have walked from castles--
"SIRE"--searching for a home.


*     *     *


smile? a little "spunk" in his coffee, maybe?



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catalinamoon
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1 posted 2002-05-21 08:51 AM


Got a smile with MY coffee, anyway.
You go, girl.
Sandra

Janet Marie
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2 posted 2002-05-21 08:56 AM


I have walked from castles,
tossing diamonds in the moat...
I can walk away from you
you should not place a bet I won't.
===============================

*smiling at you and clinking my tea mug to your coffe mug*
did ya see the spark when I did?
mothyme

How long can a girl be haunted by you ...
Soon I'll grow up and I wont even flinch at your name.

Alanis Morissette

serenity blaze
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3 posted 2002-05-21 09:50 AM


must be a "woman" thing...smiling secrets today 's to sisters Jan and Sandra!!!
bsquirrel
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4 posted 2002-05-21 12:41 PM


If it's a woman thing I guess I can't respond. But I said half and half!

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Sven
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5 posted 2002-05-21 04:03 PM


I'm with bsquirrel. . . Coffee-mate, perhaps?  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

doreen peri
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6 posted 2002-05-21 04:05 PM


i bet you like a little spunk in the morning, don'tchya?

great write, harpo

you tell him!

Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
7 posted 2002-05-21 04:28 PM


*smack*

whoa there missy... calm down...

very good, full of... ahem... emotion.

(but does it have to RHYME???)

C

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2002-05-21 05:17 PM


I would like to know the location of the castle...time for some scuba diving...James
Magnus
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9 posted 2002-05-21 05:21 PM


Was this a first thing in the A.M. before
your first cup of coffee....or what?

Way to GO!!!!  You surely did say it loud
and clear...

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
10 posted 2002-05-21 06:02 PM


strength in words...

M

msflame
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11 posted 2002-05-21 07:47 PM


I like  your style! ump!
Saunni
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12 posted 2002-05-21 10:44 PM


Serenity, awesome style with this one, Loved it.

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

Martie
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13 posted 2002-05-21 11:02 PM


Well okay...so that is just how it is.  A castle is not always a home, for sure!  
Duncan
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14 posted 2002-05-22 12:34 PM


I can walk away from you
you should not place a bet I won't

Having to laugh a bit as I hear myself saying these words.  I can, I can...I know I can!  Don't dare me.  I'll do it!  I swear, I'll do it!  lol

ethome
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15 posted 2002-05-22 04:00 AM


I can see that Celeste!! ..........It would take more than a castle and a moat to keep a firey southern belle like you contained. But did you have to throw the damn diamonds away......just kidding I know what you mean!
Dark Stranger
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16 posted 2002-05-22 06:44 AM


scuse me ms....

found this glass
slipper..
and some other garments
in the back of a limo...

might they be yours?


(grin) enjoyed it ms

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