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Accent on Light'ning
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Accent on Light'ning |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Accent on Light’ning He fabricated visions, crafting moods’ swing in rooms of his life he placed lights here, there, soft recesses of pale filtering casting shadows amber tones moving from room to room he only accented positives negatives had their own place, behind him, away in one room he found her waiting, looking, searching, saw green eyes but too much light surrounded her sound he knew she needed his touch of accent to make her green eyes want to open wide to soft light darken with positive touch he took her to a room he made atypical for her then, he gathered slivers of amber light highsighed a few rose tones blended a soupçon of carnal radiance then uncovered a fragrance containing her essence added his to fuse musk would become her scent he felt sheer was the sound to enhance her grace draped it around, and then, he welcomed her in he took a vision accent on light’ning and made her glow from within |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
So many wonderful images here, Soleil....and a perfect ending. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Soleil Noir Elegant, is all I can think of for now. |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
*sigh* so many wonderful images and meanings here, what a beautiful poem you have penned....  Lauren~ I would rather have one breath of his hair, |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
photographicly perfect can see every detail with my eyes closed enjoyed it ms noir |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
how'd you know? lol i love it! a fine write |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
You've such a way with words... soft and sensual... ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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LRbaba Junior Member
since 2002-05-07
Posts 30Dallas, Texas, |
I'm blushing ms noir this tune is fire understated like a dashel hammet script look for the next episode great metric flow by the way i like how spare and stringy your lines are more LR |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Soleil Noir darling girl this is such an absolutely beautiful write, you’ve written the images so well. Truly exquisite writing the sparseness of simplicity blended into a perfect accent of light and shade. This is really one of mademoiselle’s finest pieces. Utterly utterly excellent writing   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yes. . . to find the right accents. . . for another's heart. . . well done. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
then, he gathered slivers of amber light highsighed a few rose tones blended a soupçon of carnal radiance ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Far, far too many phrases I love here for me to choose one or two....this is very...very...soft and sensual and I love it!! Wonderful! I'm so glad I didn't miss this one! ~Hugs~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I truly do like the feel of this poem.... all the way to the ending...which is OHHHH YEAH!!!!! |
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EternitysHorizon Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 145Twilight's Orchestra |
All sparks have in reaching destination sought often without within as yet to touch knowing is the touch flaming the light leading illumination calling Well said EH |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Wow this is good stuff -- all the way to the title. I love yr words. She said burn ... together. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
diggin' this. i like the soft hues throughout, and the emphasis on positive. tres cool. C |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Beautiful writing, with so much sensuality. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
lots of sensuality and eloquence in your approach.touche ms noir |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A lovely sensuous poem, Soliel he felt sheer was the sound to enhance her grace draped it around, and then, he welcomed her in he took a vision accent on light’ning and made her glow from within and what a perfectly beautiful ending!  ~soft hugsLyra |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, and may loves eyes always sparkle with that soft lightning and bring a spark to your heart always! (big hugggssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Soleil, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
So beautiful! I'm saving this one, to read again later, under the full effects of the midnight sun. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
such class..... beautiful ~~ Connie ~~ |
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