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Toujours Amour
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Toujours Amour |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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and you from a far these edges; those edges all I thought -- you satisfy my soul lullabies lovers of darkness dancing in scents of night what can I make of you? upright, leaning against the stone of nature breathless the roughness of your face the curve of your lips, the grin of want propped-- still narrowing the light of your eyes-- set in motion under your feet, leaves shuffling their sound, - music we dance cool air caressing your shoulders, as my fingers would trace idly touching human need we have come this far to watch stars taste eternity lowering my head to your shoulders close--just this way come now, bend with our whisper I am "your" home sleep toujours amour I would rather have one breath of his hair, one kiss of his mouth, one touch of his hand than an eternity without it. [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (05-19-2002 01:12 AM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Lauren, a passionate and sensual canvas of love painted before our eyes, through our eyes..... Lovely, well done... Barry |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Greeneyes Sounds good to me, but then I'm not him. LOL Wonderful write. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
he would be a very lucky man dear friend... miss ya much lady.  Like a red brick, |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and you from a far these edges; those edges all I thought -- you satisfy my soul lullabies lovers of darkness dancing in scents of night what can I make of you? upright, leaning against the stone of nature breathless ======================== yes....breathless ... more like...breathtaking. someones pen is enchanted all the way to exquisite.  How long can a girl be haunted by you ... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, may you always belong to him and may you always sing sweet lullabyes of love to each other in happiness forever! (kiss on cheek) This is soooo lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
How beautiful. I am not able to read much in this computer chair yet, but I am glad I didn't miss this. Your wriing grows each time I read a new one. Sandra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
we have come this far to watch stars taste eternity Beautifully sensuous and romantic, Lauren...  ~ great big hugsLyra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lauren, I am afraid that I am running out of words to express how I feel about your writing of late....so sensual and soft... you sound SO in love. Wonderful!! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Lauren hi there this is what I call writing it flows as smooth as water over glass. Absolutely exquisite writing, I wish I could write like this Very well done, I really do love your work, you are a writer of extraordinary skill  Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Simply beautiful Lauren.  |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
this is poetry that is best read reclining on a bed with your loved one. good stuff, indeed. -Dave |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
you make it hard to be single sometimes... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Spiritual love. Beautiful. She said burn ... together. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
if I were to hear you read this aloud. . . I have a feeling that I would write again from the beginning. . . simply amazing. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Love to all, and thank you for the gracious replies..... With Warm Regard Lauren~ I would rather have one breath of his hair, one kiss of his mouth, one touch of his hand than an eternity without it. [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (05-22-2002 10:01 AM).] |
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msflame Member
since 2002-05-21
Posts 188 |
This is a fine, sensual write....umm very nice indeed. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Each and every word had me .... at the end of my seat ... falling ... but more than that, they found me ... breathless |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Lauren darling girl again your writing is outstandingly beautiful in its form it’s utterly utterly breathtaking in its beauty. Your writing in this is exquisite, I love it utterly utterly. lovers of darkness dancing in scents of night what can I make of you? upright, leaning against the stone of nature breathless Sometimes I swear you write with starlight, this is one of those times. I wonder from whence came these words of finest flow that trickle through this delight with pure wonder. Obviously they came from within a mind of sparkling dreams Absolutely beautiful writing darling I love the growth of you. Perfect darling heart utterly utterly perfect. And yes I love it utterly As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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