Open Poetry #20 |
No Question |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
No Question there is where I shall stay nothing in life can tear me away the bridge is there proceed on never when you look shall it be gone and why do you question the terms of we as with souls I have half the other is thee do not study these feelings in a book they hang on stars at night just look a past a present a future untold you are safe in the envelope of my hearts fold |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I really like the title over this content! These lines are special.. "do not study these feelings in a book they hang on stars at night just look a past a present a future untold you are safe in the envelope of my hearts fold" I really enjoyed the write! |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
OMG, this si just awesome! Simply awesome, Girl! I love this! Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Your words dance upon the page and on the tongue as ice cream...delicate and sweet ThisDiamond |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
mm yes slick ms you do say it with a lady touch enjoyed it |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
beautiful..... I have been so busy at work that I haven't had much time to post... but your writing as always is wonderfull.... ~~ Connie ~~ |
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