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Professor Gloom
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0 posted 2002-05-20 02:30 PM


Soft dimming light moods
Cast shadows almost unseen
Wind chime music broods

She poses serene
Gazing at mountain twilight
Dress of cool new green

At last it is night
Lit by stars and half moonbeams,
She is my delight.

Gloom


© Copyright 2002 Aszard Drazlom - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-05-20 02:32 PM



Thank you for the visuals, Professor...

ethome
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2 posted 2002-05-20 02:39 PM


Yes, I have to agree with Sunshine, wonderful image! Pristine and serene at the same time!
serenity blaze
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3 posted 2002-05-21 01:54 AM


written in starlight...

this is a lovely surprise!

beautiful.

Zinsser
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4 posted 2002-05-21 01:58 AM


Beautiful....   : )
Has everything I like  ....green...starlight....moonbeams.... hint of love.... night time macick   : )
even happy   : )
~~ Connie ~~

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2002-05-21 06:30 AM


Very nice...one of my favorites from you...James
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6 posted 2002-05-21 09:16 AM


Gloom ... So romantic. I like it. Bob
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2002-05-21 09:19 AM


Professor, this is very romantic..
Perfectly lovely.

~Morning Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Professor Gloom
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8 posted 2002-05-21 11:37 AM


Thank you, All
I am pleased this is so well received,
It’s about a small fruit tree.

Gloom

msflame
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9 posted 2002-05-21 08:00 PM


just a guess, but you're an avid reader I bet right?  This is nice.
Martie
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10 posted 2002-05-21 08:24 PM


Lovely!
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11 posted 2002-05-21 08:56 PM


Ooo....

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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12 posted 2002-05-21 09:48 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo lovely, sweet friend, may she always light the stars and the heavens of your heart and bring great loves joy to you forever! (big huggsssssss) I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Aszard, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Zinsser
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13 posted 2002-05-22 10:28 AM


a fruit tree.....   : )
well that is a lucky tree  
to have such beautiful words written about it  

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