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In Step
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In Step |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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In Step When I am on the edge of down I look towards you to hold the line. It never fails, you always are the need that shows a trust of mind. *~~* I've never walked your shoes before and mine are rather small But each time that I make that step you're in my paces, all. I'd let you trace my whereabouts and step my in-betweens those movements, thoughts and words of rhyme are all within your means. I walk them towards you, distance free positioned, set in place To reach up to the tall of you and arms to interlace. *~~* And on my toes, these shoes must bend those lips of yours to kiss just right. And if I wait just long enough they seal my fate, to dream each night. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Being tall, I completely get this.  And, as always, yr words fill me up. Thanks for sharin' 'em here.She said burn ... together. -TON Oh, and as a P.S. *~~* looks like a frowny/trepidated animal of some kind! (mike, needin' vacay) [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (05-22-2002 07:05 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
hey you *~~* was to break up the first and last verse causin I rhythmed them differently *s Yes you needs a vacation by(e) now and I do love you tall dudes..*s hugss M (been sneezin' all day..don't know what's up with that but it beats coughin for a while *s |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Ah've been the same. Gettin' a bi' sick. NOT GOOD fr Calgary. Will get better.... Anyway, ah'll let others respond to yr beautiful verse now.  Mike She said burn ... together. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Like this, Maureen. Always you write beautifully. Sandra |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
the steps, matched in cadence two soldiers whose hearts are flounced in rhythm never too large to be filled by others shoes and their steps towards another are wonder paths meant to be walked beautifully constructed, Maur and chock full of meaning and yearning *s* Jeff |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
If the shoe fits, dance in it! I really liked this. The unexpected, always a joy to find. ThisDiamond |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Well I'm just a short SH...eepester, but I'd still put my foots in your footsteps....wonderful write.. jwesley [This message has been edited by jwesley (05-22-2002 10:10 PM).] |
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