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Somewhere In The World
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Somewhere In The World |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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Somewhere In The World Don't pretend with me anymore...we both know what is true Behind your fake smile I know you're heart is broken into two How many times must we go through this...before you understand With me you can show your true self...I am an honest friend I know the pain you've endured...I know the tears you refuse to cry Just like I know everytime it kills you, when yet it's time to say another goodbye I won't pretend to have magical words, or something amazing to say Just know that I really do care...and by your side I'd like to stay When the world turns cold...and you just want to give in Remember it gets hardest before it gets better...you have to fight from within The road is going to be hard...you and I have both found that out Tears and pain though aren't what life is always about Behind every dark cloud lies a rainbow surrounded by blue sky Behind every tear there is a smile and love that won't make you cry Believe in me, for I won't hurt you...believe in yourself...you have a wonderful heart Letting go...and letting your guard down is a start If you find you can't trust me...that it's just to hard to do I want you to remember something...I really have cared about you If we must say goodbye...know you have taught me so many things You've taught me the joy in living...what it feels to just let go and "sing" I hope all your dreams come true sweet friend...and that you get all you hope for If you need a friend to share your good news with...please come knock on my door And if you just want to be alone....living with your pain and fear Know somewhere in the world someone cares...and does understand your every tear "you can't stop the rain from pouring down can't stop the world from turning 'round can't stop me from loving you no matter what you do" [This message has been edited by Aimster (05-21-2002 10:48 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssss) Oh Amy, this is such a beautifully sympathetic poem, sweet friend, and you can bet I will always be here for you when you need someone to talk to as I know we all would love to! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I have always loved the honest emotions you bring out in your writing Amy ... they always touch my heart, as does this wonderful piece. Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy darling lil sis of my heart this is absolutely beautiful your writing grows in content and style constantly. You always manage to bring your wonderful honesty to the forefront of whatever you write. I love the way you’ve written this, it’s utterly superb, the flow is divine all the way through. This really is an excellent piece darling heart you have excelled yourself. The feelings reach from within the page, you have written this sooooooo very well Wonderful writing utterly wonderful    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
If you find you can't trust me...that it's just to hard to do I want you to remember something...I really have cared about you If we must say goodbye...know you have taught me so many things You've taught me the joy in living...what it feels to just let go and "sing" I hope all your dreams come true sweet friend...and that you get all you hope for If you need a friend to share your good news with...please come knock on my door And if you just want to be alone....living with your pain and fear Know somewhere in the world someone cares...and does understand your every tear =========================== Beautiful poem of sincerety and no regrets Amy-girl...knowing when to let go takes just as much heart as holding on and fighting for something.... As always, that sunshine heart of yours is there, warming your rhymes.  heart-hugs jm How long can a girl be haunted by you ... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I've found that no one tells the ups and downs of a relationship like you Amy. . . the stories of your heart. . . excellent work. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Amy, this is heartwrentchingly beautiful and shows your desire to be faithful friend as I know you are! Sorry I have been so distant, a lot going on, but I hope all is well. Love ya Email me.Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
a beautiful wish, as well as a beautiful write. good stuff!  -Dave |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
A very warm open heartfelt write Amy. To have a friend like you is like haveing stability in one's life. I really enjoyed the kindness in this piece! The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Noah... thank you for your kind words. They always are so special to me. You my dear friend have such a beautiful heart. Take care. Kit... Thank you for your wonderful compliment. I am so glad you enjoy my work...I am a huge admirer of yours...and as far as honest emotions go...I humbly thank you for that as well, for that is what I strive for...honesty is the most important thing in life...goes hand in hand with sincerity Marsha, sweet sis of my heart, as always thank you for your love and support...you always make me smile, you are such a wonderful friend and sister and I am very lucky indeed to have you. Love you JM, as always a word from you makes my day and leaves me with such a huge smile. thank you for your continued support and understanding of me...and what you said about letting go is so true...sometimes letting go when the time is right does more help than holding on too long. take care, so good to see you. hope all is well. love ya, amy John, Thank you for such a beautiful compliment. You always leave a rainbow of a reply, that just makes the sun shine that much brighter. I love you dear man...and thank heavens you're a part of this place. Take care. Saunni, no apologies necessary, i certainly understand how hectic life can get. thank you for taking the time to read and reply to my work...as always it means so much. i am doing very well yes thank you and I hope you are well too, and given the chance i will email you. take care. amy Dave, Thank you for your kind reply. Most generous of you to take the time to do so. Thanks for the thumbs up too. Take care... Eric, thank you for such a sweet and heartfelt reply...i've never had anyone tell me before that i was true stability, that is a high compliment, at least i think so. you are very kind dear sir...and i thank you. take care. God bless you all. Love you much. ~Amy~ "you can't stop |
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