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Open Poetry #20

This Castle that is me...

MIdsummerRain
Member

since 2002-05-19

Posts 175
St. Louis, Missouri

0 posted 2002-05-22 02:50 AM

The crumbling of my castle walls,
The winds of time has wrought;
Have taken me down the path of life:
To this time & place have brought.
A portal in my castle wall,
The eye of the soul does see;
The beaten path that lies in front,
And in behind of me.
The flowing of a river stream,
Of thoughs I know so well;
Where different things seem both the same,
Where only dreams foretell.
My only aim,
Is to cross that shore;
To gain the one true knowledge,
Waiting at my castle door.
They say that Im a dreamer,
I build castles in the air;
Although, what is said is meant,
This leaves me with no despair.
To me which is important,
Is that the soul be free;
For no one shall ever take away,
This castle that is me...

The strands in your eyes
That color them wonderful
Stop me & steal my breath...

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

1 posted 2002-05-22 03:23 AM

A portal in my castle wall,
The eye of the soul does see;
The beaten path that lies in front,
And in behind of me.
The flowing of a river stream,
Of thoughs I know so well;
Where different things seem both the same,

Damn, very cool write.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-05-22 08:15 AM

YAY!!! Yes, never ever let anyone change who you are and topple the castle of your precious dreams, for you are a very loving and special person and I believe with all my heart dreams can come true and to believe in them is a very powerful thing! (big hugggssssss) You are a delight to us all, sweet friend, I'm so happy to read your lovely words here, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rayne, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (05-22-2002 08:15 AM).]

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