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MilchstrabeStern
Junior Member

since 2002-05-19

Posts 23

0 posted 2002-05-20 03:06 AM

I hold a passion
Deep within my heart
Its not about fashion
for you can give smiles
even from many miles

This smile i cant hide
Holds a secret i cant tell
You ask? Well i have lied
For if i say, I'll go to hell

A love so strong
A love you cant see
It has been so long...
Why cant it be you and me?

Hiddin within me
Lies no sin
But lies my love
For the one i admire
My only desire

Like the flower
You're name rings
by the hour
of all things

Its your name
My heart throbs
The name i love
it rids all sobs

Yet still do you realize?
What i have been hidding
Is it time?
For you to be mine

Under the moonlight
Under the starlight
Under the sunlight
You're beuty prevales

In my mind
In my heart
In my eyes
Your sweetness thrives

If you could only see
What i suffer when your away
What i suffer when your near
Why is it this that i fear....

You make me smile
You make me cry
As i lay in bed
All i can do is...love

Maybe youd understand?
If we were hand in hand
Maybe you cool feel?
The love i hold for you..

Its time to say
What i hid from you
I love you...
I only wish that will do

For now i must leave
For love is much too powerful
I hope you believe
This love i have for you...

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2002-05-20 08:17 AM

a combination of both joy and anguish...

big sighs, m'friend. Love wants a voice, doesn't it?

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2002-05-20 08:39 AM

sometimes a secret like that needs to be shouted from the rooftops. You expressed this well
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

MilchstrabeStern
Junior Member

since 2002-05-19

Posts 23

3 posted 2002-05-20 10:15 AM

I thought this poem was really bad, but oh well........It was for a friend a friend I like...

CowgirlFreedom17
Member

since 2002-05-20

Posts 82
Mississippi

4 posted 2002-05-20 10:22 AM

Wow. This is a great write. I can relate and it really touches my heart.

Don't hold back the words you really mean.

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