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Zinsser
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0 posted 2002-05-19 11:23 PM



Uncorrupted


I stood on the edge of a canyon
Singing song to the open space
Feeling everything around me
Including the nothingness
Of the open place

All at once I felt a presence
Not flesh and blood at all like me
But one thats full of everything
Corrupted by nothing and free
The feeling was vast
As veast as my eyes could see

So familiar was this, whatever
I felt only comfort and content
For it was my soul that surrounded me
To show me what forever meant
Connie McDonald
Copyright@2002
May 19, 2002
6:20 PM


[This message has been edited by Zinsser (05-19-2002 11:26 PM).]

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2002-05-20 01:46 AM


Thank you for sharing this, as it felt like a big hug from the sky.
bsquirrel
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2 posted 2002-05-20 02:02 AM


I agree with midnitesun. A big for you.

Mike

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Zinsser
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3 posted 2002-05-20 10:03 AM


I'm glad it made you feel good   : )
Thanks
~~ Connie ~~

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