Open Poetry #20 |
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Una Cuestión de la Pasión |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion ![]() |
Una Cuestión de la Pasión It is a question of passion that brings sleeplessness in the night, balancing this complacency, weighing her darkness against light. Una cuestión que no se reclinará A matter that will never rest, haunting every breath you draw, a ragged catch seizes your throat, marking moments with tiny flaws. Pensamientos de cuál usted falta Daydreams of what you are missing plague and discolor the skyline; she lives there, while you are lost here - distance is the deciding line. Pero, usted circunda en otro Still, you circle one another even though this is meant to be, spiraling higher into loss fog over sea, fog over sea. © 2002 Corinne Bailey All Rights Reserved [This message has been edited by Corinne (05-16-2002 08:08 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggssssss) Oh Corinne, I hope everything is alright, sweet friend, I felt such sadness and loneliness in these words! (kiss on cheek) May you always rise over the fog and find your place in the sun always in love, sweet friend, this is heartfelt, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Corinne, thnak you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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elfin_tigress Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 101Someplace |
Wow, Corinne, that is beautiful. I feel it. The weaving of Spanish into the poem makes it even more potent. "a ragged catch seizes your throat" That really caught me. Also, I like how the rhyme scheme was soft, and it didn't disrupt the flow of my reading, even though I felt the rhyme. Very well done! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Corinne Wonderful! The Spanish..such a passionate sounding language, goes with the theme so well. Much enjoyed! |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A superb blend of languages and emotions... Nicely done Corinne.. |
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bsquirrel![]()
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
God I loved this. You keep, somehow, getting better and better. Which is outright bizarre, 'cause yr already at such a high plateau. She said burn ... together. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Still, you circle one another even though this is meant to be, spiraling higher into loss fog over sea, fog over sea. I would ditto the squirrel. Very cool poem. It was between this and the second verse. All of it, I loved. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ This is sooooooooooo gorgeous~ You're such a versatile writer and a pleasure to read EVERYTIME~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Corinne, this is just wonderful! The blending of the two languages adds so much to the piece. Just beautiful...and much enjoyed. ~Hugs~ |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you kindly, Noah, Elfin, Martie, Magnus, bsquirrel, Duncan, Marge and Enchantress! Corinne |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
There is much beauty in your words as always ![]() |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
si. . . ![]() I always enjoy reading your work. . . your voice is truly your own. . .that's why I like it . . . --------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
muy primo for lover stuff (grin) enjoyed it ms |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Cor, hon, this is a gripper..very well done, but then your deepness is of a rarity...very gentle smile with a hug of not seeing you for a while |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Una cuestion de la pasion Una cuestion del amor Una cuestion me pregunto What am I writing in Spanish for?!? ![]() |
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winston Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 204NW of Eden |
Usted habla espanol Usted habla ingles Usted habla la lengua del amor Usted habla la lengua de la pasion Usted es un individuo peligroso :-)) "am a tourist not a terrorist, don't shoot, cause we are all on a journey to God" Michak |
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