Open Poetry #20 |
The Kingdom of Lox........reposted for Larry C |
Balladeer
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When I was just a young boy sitting on my father's knee, I marveled at all the stories and fables he nightly told to me And one fable, in particular, stayed in my memory - About the small kingdom of Lox. Lox was ruled by a kind and gentle king Who gave his subjects everything But he had one quirk, one tiny thing Which made a paradox. He would send gifts to his subjects - precious gold and diamond rings, Porcelain vases, painting masterpieces, pottery and things But each precious gift he wrapped up, tied it with a piece of string And used a flimsy box. The recipients were proud that he had sent them such a token (Though, normally, when they unwrapped it, they would find it broken), But they considered him eccentric - not an unkind word was spoken. Such was life in the kingdom of Lox. Late last week my father left me - calmly up and passed away, A spirit so unbending lost to sickness and decay. The ticking of a heart with strength to take one's breath away Stopped .... like a rusted, battered clock. And me, I spend time contemplating life and death and things And who will win the pennant - will the grass return in spring? How beautiful the moon looks when I hear Frank Sinatra sing - And about the small kingdom of Lox. Now, when nighttime falls and crickets sing I wonder and ponder on why MY king Placed such a very precious thing In such a fragile box. |
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Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I remember this...and your heart is showing. Rightly so. From the King of Poets...to a wonderful friend. Thank you, 'Deer... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Well done, Balladeer. You understand what loss, and love, are all about. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Michael, Such a healing poem for such a broken heart. Bless you kind friend and dear, 'deer man! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhMichael~ What a beautiful sharing from your heart to Larry's~ 'Now, when nighttime falls and crickets sing I wonder and ponder on why MY king Placed such a very precious thing In such a fragile box' Such a tender share~ Thank you for being you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very inspirational Michael.... And so thoughtful of you to repost for Larry. ~Hugs~ |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Michael This is a poetic gift of thought and thoughtfulness, for Larry...and it touched a place in me as well. Love you for it! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
This is just beautiful Michael Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is a beautiful poem, Michael. Its amazing how delicate our bodies are. Our spirits and our minds are strong, but we are put into a very fragile box. The whole Passions family is in mourning today...thank you for sharing this with all of us. ~sad hugs Lyra |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
’Deer dear heart this is utterly utterly perfect, you’ve really surpassed yourself this time. Normally your writing is superb, in this one poem you have explained something beyond explanation. This has to be a terrible time for Larry but that you’ve posted one of your superbly crafted pieces simply must aid him and bring some comfort to his soul. That you have held out your hand in friendship and love is so typical of you ‘Deer it shows exactly what you are made of. Your compassion does you great credit. And I just know Larry feels it within his heart. This is exceptional writing, certainly I’ve come to expect the very best from you, creatively and in language form. This is a real beauty, and absolutely wonderful first class piece. YOU do know I LOVE this don’t you? Good it is exquisitely crafted. Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
classic too sad to comment |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Balladeer, I am speechless, there's not much I can say right now other than you are a true angel and your heart shines with such love that I know will help our dearest Larry so much tonight, for your wisdom shines and feels for all love and what it is worth even after a loss! (big hugggssssssss) Forgive me,I have nothing more to say about this since I feel sad right now, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Balladeer, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
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Posts 5455 |
Perfect for the moment. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Michael, this is just beautiful. And a very appropriate one to repost for Larry and his precious daughter. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Amen. She said burn ... together. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Michael~ you are showing your heart, and how lovely it is.... Lauren~ I would rather have one breath of his hair, |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Michael, Indeed. and some of us are lucky enough to realise that while our loved ones are around |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh Balladeer, it is so nice of you to share this with Larry. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
You've really got me crying now, this is just so YOU, Michael. This is such a kind gesture for Larry and such a beautiful and tragic story. It's a keeper, in fact, I'm also printing it out!~ Take care and hugs for just being you!, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Balladeer
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Thank you, Melissa...and everyone. How I wish there had not been a reason to post this tonight....hug your loved ones. |
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andEmmamakes3 Member
since 2002-05-11
Posts 66Kent |
’Deer hi there that you have taken the time to repost such a superbly crafted poem to offer in some way comfort to Larry shows without doubt how compassionate and loving you are. Beautiful writing and amazing sentiments, but over all the love you feel for Larry C must give his soul some measure of comfort in a time of inconsolable grief Emma Eternity, stands laughing at old time |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This has always been one of my very favorites... a glittering jewel in your beautifully crafted crown of words. It's one I've read countless times and would hate for anyone to miss... but how my heart breaks at the "why" of its repost. |
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