Open Poetry #20 |
Cut It Complicated |
Mark Coburn Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 71 |
here's one of my WIREMAN poems.......... shredded coconut moist and tasty inside, the feeling in pieces and there is no fair share fact is there's only the question, "do ya dare?" laid bare sweet feast down we are to the last piece..."cut it complicated!" that's what I say mi spiritu sanctu on parade never wanna be caught in a charade, and like Leon Russell said, "were lost in a masquerade" winding, turning, big fat slice icing dripping shreds, even when ya gotta make yer bed on shaky ground me smooth, slow rhythm, ahhhhh!!!!!!! shear delight, this preflight leading to exstacy, timeless embrace jump in sink or swim, no about face cuttin' my slice complicated, just the way it's gotta be, as I ride off into the sunset, shoutin' "cut it complicated for me, baby please!"....mark |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Ya know something? I love cocnut, and I love Leon Russell! I'm as "loony" as a bird on a wire. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Mark, Why do I get the feeling this is about more than coconut, but loved the flow and metaphor of this. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Mark Coburn Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 71 |
ketry and midnitesun........thanx for the comments....I kinda like this one .....mark |
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