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Kissing Your Love Goodbye
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Kissing Your Love Goodbye |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Kissing Your Love Goodbye Truly no one waves a magic wand and makes all your problems go away when you are in love. You will find that circumstance and situation may drive you apart but hopefully they will bring you closer together when you are in love. The future of love will be determined not only by your willingness to pursue love but also by the willingness of your significant other who may or may not be in love. Yes it will not take you long to discover that it takes two to develop a relationship based on love and understanding and if either one wants no part of this thing called love you can kiss your love goodbye. JamesLee May20 2002 I am not kissing my love goodbye. Just thinking of how important it is for two hearts to share the same desires for the success or failure of love. [This message has been edited by JamesMichael (05-20-2002 05:06 PM).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Real good soilid and true advice James.......A great reminder to us all! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh James, this is so very true, sweet friend, it is a very hard thing to do indeed to say goodbye but I am always admired by those who follow their hearts and if they feel unhappy having the courage to kiss goodbye like that! (sigh) I hope this never happens to you again and true love always fills your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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J New Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 9UK |
hey there... this is a really nice peice, full of understanding and hope and strength, it's wonderful to see words like this, not saying the same usual "I'll die if you go" or "i'll live somehow" it's this acceptance i think that you put across, that you'll let them go too.... one thing, If i may say which i dont like is that this seems to read like greeting card phrases, and in my view takes away from a pretty poem, i suppose a few nips and tucks and it would read more poetic like.... anyways take it easy, it's only a suggestion.... keep well J |
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J New Member
since 2002-05-19
Posts 9UK |
hey there... this is a really nice peice, full of understanding and hope and strength, it's wonderful to see words like this, not saying the same usual "I'll die if you go" or "i'll live somehow" it's this acceptance i think that you put across, that you'll let them go too.... one thing, If i may say which i dont like is that this seems to read like greeting card phrases, and in my view takes away from a pretty poem, i suppose a few nips and tucks and it would read more poetic like.... anyways take it easy, it's only a suggestion.... keep well J "so take this thing, make it sparkle and glow |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
nice long sentences, and a reminder of the 50/50 deal in life or the give and take, take care! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sometimes goodbye is all thats left tho...and then you can start fresh. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
James Michael, so true to all you say. What a wise heart you have and a beautiful one at that. Great write!  Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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EternitysHorizon Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 145Twilight's Orchestra |
Comittment you speak of too often lacking in fear the only way to find what we all desire Well said Eternity |
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