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| Open Poetry #20 |
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Dull trace |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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She gave me dull candy ache, the beautiful disappointment of living. Alone, with flowers, and crisp edges. A trellis dripping white rose patter. She gave me her dull eb of thorns and placed them slowly through my hands. It was a pact of sweat and bones. We never forgot to give them sun. Her soil crumbles in my hands. Her stones are sweet and close and warm. She left her name among the sky. I left her tracings in my sigh. She said burn ... together. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BSquirrel~ You always write your thoughts so creatively~ Another enjoyable read~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks, Marge. *smiles from squirrel to deer* I'm off t' see my girlfriend in Calgary in a week, and man, I can't wait! She said burn ... together. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I love the images and feel of this work... lovely! ~Tier  "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Lots of FEEL within this write...as well as the longing of another...liked the metaphors. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I'm glad y' both enjoyed. I just got lucky with this one -- I swear it fell into my computer by itself. She said burn ... together. -TON [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (05-19-2002 05:45 PM).] |
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