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Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

0 posted 2002-05-19 08:43 AM

A moment
forgotten...set aside;
yet never really
gone from the heart.
One look, one kiss
forever sealed,
forever felt.
Deep inside
a flame blazing...
waiting to burst forth,
consume the hearts of two.
A treasured hand
held into Eternity,
a guiding hand leading
through Love's maze.
Coming out into the moment
when love began, love grew,
love became only you.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2002-05-19 09:24 AM

love the last line IvyRose, just beautiful
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2002-05-19 10:41 AM

Ivy, this could be on a card....given to
someone special.....Truly a gem of a poem.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2002-05-19 11:42 AM

Ivy Rose,
A lovely write, enjoyed the read.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2002-05-19 12:07 PM

I really enjoyed this one..you captured the feeling well.
*s
M

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-05-19 02:24 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I still yearn so much for my first kiss and I'm hoping this summer I can share it with my Joanna if we get to meet! (kiss on cheek) May this afterglow of that simple kiss always bring a smile to your heart, sweet friend, this is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (05-19-2002 02:24 PM).]

J
New Member

since 2002-05-19

Posts 9
UK

6 posted 2002-05-19 05:13 PM

hey there..
wow, what an amazing poem, this is really good! youv'e captured this love in a moment so well.
the start and finnish were very good, original and beautiful... i think they make the poem what it is.....
well done.
J

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

7 posted 2002-05-19 05:18 PM

Nice poem of being consumed by love. I like the blazing fire y' wrote about.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2002-05-19 06:01 PM

IvyRose~

'A moment
forgotten...set aside;
yet never really
gone from the heart.
One look, one kiss
forever sealed,
forever felt.
----------------
Coming out into the moment
when love began, love grew,
love became only you.'

Sometimes ... I feel you peek right into my heart~
This soooooooooo tenderly resides in a special heart-chamber of me~

Thank you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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