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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2002-04-10 10:53 PM



Fluttering through each lily pad
Disturbing every flower
Rippling in the tidal pool
Hour after hour

Cooling off communal heat
Ruffling every leaf
Gentle breeze dearly sweet
Sudden shower brief

Peepers sing the night tune
Chirpers greet the dawn
Rustling through tender to
Another heart to fawn

Copyright Kkh 4/10/02

© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
SmittenKitten
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1 posted 2002-04-10 11:08 PM



Kathleen~ A beautiful serenade to Spring   I'm so happy it's finally here!  Great rhyme and flow to this, it read so smoothly.

hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-04-10 11:32 PM




YAY!!! May the frogs and birds come out and sing their symphonies of spring together and fill all our hearts with their permeating beauty! (kiss on cheek) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-05-30 01:12 AM


Spring took its time getting to the midwest, but now that it is here, I couldn't be happier. This is a great poem.

                                      Dawn

ethome
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4 posted 2002-05-30 06:55 AM


Ah this is so pleasent! Beautifully done!!
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5 posted 2002-05-30 08:55 PM


Nice, I like your spring themes.
Sandra

jwesley
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6 posted 2002-05-30 09:18 PM


Ah....

used to have a place across the road from us that came alive with such a malestrom of cheepers, peepers, croakers, squeekers and other wonderful sounds everytime it rained or even got more humid than normal.  We'd go sit out front and just listen.  Especially coupled with the thunder and the rain.

Now it's a house.  It's not so heavenly here anymore.  And the field next door is gone too...we're just a neighbood now...alas.

Thanks for the memory.


jimmy

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7 posted 2002-05-31 08:12 AM


Such a song, sung from your poetic lips...
Nicely done, Kathy....

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