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Ode to the Heart of Sleel
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Ode to the Heart of Sleel |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever 
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I watch her, but she sees through me, I want her, but shes untrue to me, I am betrayed, but shes really trying, I hear her laughing, but she's really crying, I see her living, but she's really dying. I am lost, but on me she's relying. Being with her is life distilled, I shall cradle this passion with all my will. In the name of LOVE, I hold her still. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very interesting...James |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
ES darling heart this is such an aching image filled piece, I swear I can see the picture clearly, and how it stirs embers of remember within The trials of a soul that is so vulnerable to one heart is heart wrenching darling heart. Take care of yourself and if this isn’t fiction here’s a ((((( hug ))))  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy   Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
such power packed emotion. Great writing ES Like a red brick, |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Now that's a tough committment but one that has developed from an uncompromising heart! Good writing! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nicely done....covered a lot of bases with this poem... |
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