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Moments' Breath
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Moments' Breath |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Moments' Breath I watch my time, its ticking gone the days continue, night 'til dawn a moments' breath from lips, yours drawn the last of words, I'm holding on. I seek the morn, horizons glow yet capture dreams, the feelings so intensely real, in want of know a moment's breath, your warmth in flow. I ease my fear of shadows loss when kiss of yours, my lips do cross to leave behind relief, emboss a whispered breath, a moments toss Of words that echo through my soul retaining parts, enticing whole a moments' breath, condemned contol to offer me in rhymed console. A moments' breath, on yours I feed to edge the stillness, and proceed the blend of feelings, that of need in moment's breath I'm held, indeed. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
This is beautiful, Wynter....I loved reading this.  ~sky You look inside my wild mind |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Maureen darling girl now this is superb writing, the flow is divine the rhythm is excellent. As always your writing is utterly utterly wonderful darling heart, you never fail to make me smile. You never write anything less than your best and this is exquisite, a smile just waiting to blossom. I love it utterly I love it utterly utterly love it   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Wow........ I don't even know what to say about this. Only that it's winter and summer all in one. Awesome! She said burn ... together. |
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