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Soul connection - shape poem
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Soul connection - shape poem |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands 
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sometimes, quite unexpected, feelings connect on the internet you read a line or verse and you know, two souls have met strange is it not, not knowing the person behind you simply feel connected as wires twined some relationships will be build in a total abstract world minds unfurled as of now you read mine ah ha thine I've read just did now minds unfurled in this beautiful world a relationship slowly build connected to you as a wire twined yet I'm unknown to the one standing behind you've read my line, my verse and I think we just met and quite unexpected our feelings did connect on the internet A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (05-17-2002 11:23 PM).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Tita darling girl this is utterly utterly perfect, you’ve really surpassed yourself this time. Normally your writing is superb, in this one poem you have painted a picture of such clarity that I can see the vision This is exceptional writing, certainly I’ve come to expect the very best from you, creatively and in language form. This is a real beauty, and absolutely wonderful first class piece. YOU do know I LOVE this don’t you? Good it is splendiferous This is really fabulous writing sometimes when you don’t expect it showers of moonbeams descend on you. They dropped like little twinkles of delight when I read this. Oh my eyes they are refreshed and my soul is washed in joy this is sooooooooo beautiful.  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy   To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Absolutely lovely, I feel its connection. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Titia, this is perfect! I must try one of these shape poems soon. ~Hugs~ |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is very beautiful, Titia..both in form and thought. You did a wonderful job here  |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Spectacular, Titia... Both the words and also the shape... I have tried to do shape poems, but they never come out right for me. Yours is perfect!  ~loving hugsLyra |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 YAY!!! Oh Titia, we are all so lucky to have such a wonderful friend like you, sweet friend, this is wonderful how the Internet has brought us all together and I am blessed I can know you and your classic words! (kiss on cheek) This is a gorgeous shape poem, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Titia, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well aren't you the clever one  this was awesome Titia, really excellent! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Thanks my dear internetfriends, I think our souls were twined all together tonight. Shape poem it is.. er...translated the Dutch too literally. Let's stay connected for the rest of our lifes  ya all, TitiaA rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (05-17-2002 11:35 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetTitia~ This is simply SPLENDID ~ You are so very, very versatile ... this is formed like a true champ~ Like the sands of time ... Your thoughts run down the page ... Dropping into the soul of others~ I love ya' gal~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
It is amazing the way we can connect to those unseen on the internet. This was wonderful Titia, and the form is perfect. Very visual and impressive. Hugs to you. Like a red brick, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Titia, Wonderful shape form and rythem. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Titia...you wrote this beauty, and you wrote it well, for souls DO meet where inner nets dwell... |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
I think I have found me the bestest friends a lady could ever dream of. to ya allIn September I'll be hugging you to death LOL Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Titia, this flows as it should, like sand through the hourglass. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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