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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-05-18 06:18 AM



I love the sound,
the rain trickling down,
memories straining to rise
of a time walking in puddles,
dancing in the splashes,
daring cars to close in on the curb.

I love the feel,
of warm soaking rains,
the smell of its heaviness
in the air,
the walks hand in hand,
the wet taste of lips,
the feel of your warmth
coming through your layers
to mine.

This is a Spring of dampness,
a needed cleansing of earth,
of soul.
I wait for that moment
when we can walk through the myst,
feel its reign touching us,
while inside the tears
of our past, soak inward..
leaving no traces in our mind.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2002 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
elfin_tigress
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since 2002-05-15
Posts 101
Someplace
1 posted 2002-05-18 09:17 AM


I love the rain.  Actually, it was raining when I read this, so it was even more sweet to me.  A very nice read.  Thanks!
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2002-05-18 09:21 AM


Maureen,
A delightful write to read, enjoyed.

bsquirrel
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3 posted 2002-05-19 06:59 PM


Eloquent telling of a need so deep, it's like life...

Loved this.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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