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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2002-05-22 07:43 AM


Inner Space

We often float in inner space
A pastoral and a liberal place
A place of conjured thoughts and dreams
A place we conquer all extremes.

A place where justice is not blind
A jury of empathies mind
A garden that was lost to us
A Noah’s arc an omnibus.

A place to hid a place to live
A place of rest and forgive
A restaurant for our goals
A place to mend our very souls

We all are subject to this mist
We all accept this moment’s bliss.
And recognize the vacant stare
When we stop and visit there.

A place of nectar and flower
Rejuvenate and power.


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Janet Marie
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1 posted 2002-05-22 08:06 AM


A place where justice is not blind
A jury of empathies mind
A garden that was lost to us
A Noah's arc an omnibus.

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and that will be the coolest verse I'll read today....
I do so love the poetic traces of your mind's inner spaces
Tinkerbell wants you to know that she is working on keeping that promise and will be in touch soon
and? she sends you and Randy *winkies*


Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2002-05-22 08:17 AM


JM,
You know twinkies are very fattening, sorry I meant winkies. Oh well I don't think I'll gain weight on these kind of winkies or twinkies anyway. Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky.

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3 posted 2002-05-22 08:39 AM






WOW!!! For some strange reason I thought of a Starbucks matching the description reading this, then I thought of the botanical gardens! (smiles) There are many places we can contemplate and find a smile when we need one the most, sweet friend, this is excellent, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Kethry
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4 posted 2002-05-22 08:55 AM


this was very, reverie deep.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2002-05-22 09:10 AM


Noah, Thank you my riend.

Keth,
That's what it was meant to be. Thank you.

Marsha
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6 posted 2002-05-22 10:04 AM


Seymour darling boy I think this is utterly utterly spectacular. This is a truly outstandingly fabulous poem. Such beautiful words combined together blended in a confection of depth and delight, you can read this on so many levels, and I do darling boy and I do.

You know you make the finest honeyed wine for it pours over my soul and refreshes and lifts my spirit in a way that few others do.

You know I love this utterly utterly it is purely divine


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

Martie
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7 posted 2002-05-22 10:10 AM


Sy

I know this place...the older I get, the more often I visit...do you suppose some time I will stay?

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8 posted 2002-05-22 11:03 AM


We all are subject to this mist''

I loe this line, for some reason I found much peace in it....


Lauren~

I would rather have one breath of his hair,
one kiss of his mouth,
one touch of his hand
than an eternity without it.

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2002-05-22 11:26 AM


Marsha,
Once again you have lifted me to the stars.


Martie,
Dear, we all get there to stay.

Lauren,
Thank you dear.

msflame
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10 posted 2002-05-22 11:43 AM


This is a very "comforting" poem if I may say it that way.

Glenda

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2002-05-22 12:29 PM


msflame
Yes you may and thank you.

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