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Inner Space |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Inner Space We often float in inner space A pastoral and a liberal place A place of conjured thoughts and dreams A place we conquer all extremes. A place where justice is not blind A jury of empathies mind A garden that was lost to us A Noah’s arc an omnibus. A place to hid a place to live A place of rest and forgive A restaurant for our goals A place to mend our very souls We all are subject to this mist We all accept this moment’s bliss. And recognize the vacant stare When we stop and visit there. A place of nectar and flower Rejuvenate and power. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A place where justice is not blind A jury of empathies mind A garden that was lost to us A Noah's arc an omnibus. ================================= and that will be the coolest verse I'll read today.... I do so love the poetic traces of your mind's inner spaces  Tinkerbell wants you to know that she is working on keeping that promise and will be in touch soon and? she sends you and Randy *winkies*    |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, You know twinkies are very fattening, sorry I meant winkies. Oh well I don't think I'll gain weight on these kind of winkies or twinkies anyway. Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  WOW!!! For some strange reason I thought of a Starbucks matching the description reading this, then I thought of the botanical gardens! (smiles) There are many places we can contemplate and find a smile when we need one the most, sweet friend, this is excellent, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
this was very, reverie deep. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Thank you my riend. Keth, That's what it was meant to be. Thank you. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy I think this is utterly utterly spectacular. This is a truly outstandingly fabulous poem. Such beautiful words combined together blended in a confection of depth and delight, you can read this on so many levels, and I do darling boy and I do. You know you make the finest honeyed wine for it pours over my soul and refreshes and lifts my spirit in a way that few others do. You know I love this utterly utterly it is purely divine   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy I know this place...the older I get, the more often I visit...do you suppose some time I will stay?  |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
We all are subject to this mist'' I loe this line, for some reason I found much peace in it.... Lauren~ I would rather have one breath of his hair, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, Once again you have lifted me to the stars. Martie, Dear, we all get there to stay. Lauren, Thank you dear. |
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msflame Member
since 2002-05-21
Posts 188 |
This is a very "comforting" poem if I may say it that way. Glenda |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
msflame Yes you may and thank you. |
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