Open Poetry #20 |
Rogue Poet 007 |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Rogue Poet 007 His line's don't always rhyme. His flow is just so so. And most of the time he just writes silly lines about kissing and all the women he's been missing. Poetically speaking he's not all that hot. A true poet he is not. But one thing remains constant. The rogue poet always gives it all he's got. JamesLee May17 2002 |
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elfin_tigress Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 101Someplace |
This is a cute poem (in a good way). I like the scattered use of rhyme and the structured, yet free meter. My favorite part is at the end, because it shows that this rogue poet may not have the best quality, but he is devoted to his passion of writing. A very nice read. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(giggles in delight) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo cute, sweet friend, and the only thing that seperates you and James Bond is you always stand beside your true love! LOL! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I just love the way you write, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing! May love and light alwyas shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thanks Elfin and Noah for the nice responses...nothing fancy but I really enjoyed writing this...it seems to express my feelings so well...James |
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