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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-05-18 06:00 AM


Rogue Poet 007

His line's don't
always rhyme.
His flow is
just so so.
And most of the time
he just writes silly
lines about kissing
and all the women
he's been missing.

Poetically speaking
he's not all that hot.
A true poet
he is not.
But one thing
remains constant.
The rogue poet
always gives it
all he's got.

JamesLee
May17
2002


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elfin_tigress
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1 posted 2002-05-18 09:46 AM


This is a cute poem (in a good way).  I like the scattered use of rhyme and the structured, yet free meter.  My favorite part is at the end, because it shows that this rogue poet may not have the best quality, but he is devoted to his passion of writing.  A very nice read.  
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2 posted 2002-05-18 09:59 AM




(giggles in delight) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo cute, sweet friend,  and the only thing that seperates you and James Bond is you always stand beside your true love! LOL! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I just love the way you write, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light alwyas shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2002-05-18 06:43 PM


Thanks Elfin and Noah for the nice responses...nothing fancy but I really enjoyed writing this...it seems to express my feelings so well...James
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