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In A Private Language
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In A Private Language |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
We are apart with no ending destination My mind will brush the softness of your lips To sip enough of you to last another day There is no limit to the heights that we will climb My heart embraces you in lavish consolation A gentle touch to hold you warmly in my stead In need of comfort and affection, this banquet we prepare My soul keeps company as far as you may soar In harmony a bringing of this sleep, we seek to dream A blending of white light and limitless connection The very breath that fills my lungs of moist sea air To fall the walls that hide, open of these pearls of heaven As words will play upon my tongue in sweetened facination Copyright Kkh 5/17/02 |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Love does have its own language, a connection that takes many forms...really enjoyed this! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
In need of comfort and affection, this banquet we prepare My soul keeps company as far as you may soar In harmony a bringing of this sleep, we seek to dream This verse especially, I liked. Great write! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is gorgeous...and a Keeper... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Kathleen, beautifully penned as always. Much enjoyed. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oooohhhhhh...I love this, sweet friend, you awlays paint such gorgeous love with your words, sweet friend, may you and your sweetheart forever share the language of the doves in harmony! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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elfin_tigress Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 101Someplace |
This is good. I really like the images of the figurative speech you use here. "To sip enough of you to last another day" I liked that image a lot. I like the gentle language of this poem, and how it flows so naturally off my tongue. Very nice! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Kathy, this is fantastic...how you used so many other verbs and adjectives to say what others say so repetetively....myself included... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Lucky are those who know that language. Great poem. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
In need of comfort and affection, this banquet we prepare My soul keeps company as far as you may soar In harmony a bringing of this sleep, we seek to dream What a beautiful language this is TD. Well done with this beauty! Like a red brick, |
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