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Dreams Reunite |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Dreams Reunite I listened for the sound of you shadow-stepping, coming near. But in the darkness all I heard was sounds of heartbeat, mine so clear. Pounding out those rhythms strong, wishing I could touch a kiss. I opened up a window for a breeze of you, in reminisce. It caught me as I settled in and spun me 'round to dizzy me. I felt encircled by your arms the hold of you, in want to be. I watched for you to come to me eye-thoughts penetrating night. Delusioned I, for it was you who dared to cross these lips' invite. Once again, as always seems I fondle warmly in your know. In the silence of the hour, these hazel eyes on blues bestow. They pledge to you, their gift of love, their bounty driven by nights embrace. Those dreams unfold and press their will subsuming all 'til morns replace. I felt the breeze come over me and sway my thoughts to softly light upon the darkness, shadow's touch, on wings, I fly, dreams reunite. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (05-16-2002 08:14 AM).] |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
I felt the breeze come over me and sway my thoughts to softly light upon the darkness, shadow's touch, on wings, I fly, dreams reunite ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This is simply beautiful. Enjoyed. Deb |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, A lovely soft breeze, enjoyed |
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Muys Member
since 2002-04-06
Posts 389The Netherlands |
Dear Every morning I opened my window I felt the breeze come over my and my heart jumt. I love it Hugs Muys |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
They pledge to you, their gift of love, their bounty driven by nights embrace. Those dreams unfold and press their will subsuming all 'til morns replace. ======= You are on a roll, Maureen, and I love it! Write on, girl  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Maureen darling girl this is absolutely stunning poetry, beautiful it flows with wonder across the page, illuming and brightening the spirit. Truly outstanding writing. You are a fabulous writer, your use of language and form are divine, you know I love this utterly utterly love it. Perfect poetry of the heart and soul This positive sings in my soul excellent writing your pen is really magic   Love and warm stuff As always Slushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahhh, Maureen, those breezes always do get to me, and you have wrapped that breeze around all of us..very well done..very gentle smile |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This write rustled with the wings of romance and desire. Exceptional. ThisDiamond |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooo beautifully touching, sweet friend, may true loves magic always sing in your heart and sweep you off your feet into the most magical dreams ever! (kiss on cheek) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice..lots of feelings and desire...James |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A very lovely soft remembering M. As always, with your personal touch and style. You are good ya know?? Like a red brick, |
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