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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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We're not that far from the hill up top below the sea line level from the river that spills. Treading underwater turning deep blue shades drifting in between pulling faraway. Where the temperature's warm and the fish are schooled, in secret keeping among the tides that pool. From my stand point vantage I can clearly see past the hill top view across my ocean dreams. Pictured on a postcard upon the shores are laid when the tide goes out tunnels beneath the waves... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Lovely, watery images Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
I hate it when you look at the ocean while you are driving on the wrong side of the freeway cool poem babe...enjoyed it bluezzy |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ah yes. . . I can smell the air. . . an excellent portrait. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thanks Kethry, Dark stanger and Sven but umm I should have saved this or given it up completely...My computer made me do it! sheesh, you'd think I'd learn! [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (05-17-2002 04:42 PM).] |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Pictured on a postcard upon the shores are laid when the tide goes out tunnels beneath the waves... This is so pretty, Lori... Do you live near the ocean?  ~watery hugsLyra |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sounds like a most beautiful place, in words and actuality. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, this sounds like such a beautiful place to go visit, sweet friend, I was around Newport to Depoe Bay last summer in Oregon and we rented a house on the oceanside, it was breathtaking! (kiss on cheek) This is a lovely poem, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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