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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2002-05-19 01:39 AM




I stopped to enjoy the surface
of poetic waters deep,
and found myself drowning
in romantic moonlight sleep.
No chance to escape
the starlit waters of Love
that captured my heart
so easily.

In starlight’s shine,
your hand held mine,
we walked in harmony,
sweet cadence and rhyme.
No chance to escape
the starlit waters of Love
that captured my heart
so easily.

But what poetic soul in
her write mind
would even try?
Not I.

© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
IKNAP
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1 posted 2002-05-19 03:03 AM


made me think
thanks i needed that
good read for 3am

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2 posted 2002-05-19 06:19 AM


Enjoyed...James
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3 posted 2002-05-19 08:15 AM


Tis a beauty. I agree,why fight it?
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4 posted 2002-05-19 01:55 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhhh...I love this, sweet friedn, I believe the most magical words of all are those that just write themselves, and the beauty seems to diminish if we force them or fight the words! (kiss on cheek) May your destiny always write itself with much joy to go around, sweet friend, this is so enchanting, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2002-05-19 05:02 PM


What poetic soul in her WRITE mind....

Like the twist...like the poem...well done..

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6 posted 2002-05-19 05:31 PM


See? Drowning can be fun. Enjoyed, midnitesun.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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7 posted 2002-05-19 05:41 PM


MidniteSun~
Been known to tred water a time or two myself~
Wonderfully and creatively portrayed~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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8 posted 2002-05-19 06:36 PM


as well as saying thank you today, to each of you. My heart is aching today. The water sometimes gets deeper than I ever thought possible.
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