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Love's Charge Before Retreat
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Love's Charge Before Retreat |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Like the dove soaring far and high in watch with an eagle of eye as the heart reaches out to grasp a hand, a soul, a mind in clasp Like the fawn in still of soft lie among the grass flowing most high From the call of the lion in wait to the sound of still closing gate On the wings of a dragon’s flight circling stars in the still of night Soaring over land ever green reflecting a gold hue and sheen From sun to distant shine of moon the echoed call of crying loon steps in sand among dunes of sea side by side as shadows two be The sign of words that give the fire the heat and passions of love’s desire A gasp, a kiss of shuddered feel of two in now of this when real As whispers say of song once sung among the ring of bells in rung Two entwined hearts will softly beat the sound of charge and not retreat. [This message has been edited by Magnus (05-17-2002 07:09 PM).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy this is truly stunning writing. Always your words flow with hearts sighs, your voice floats through the starry skies like angels breath. And this not just soft whispers on the edge of night but it’s purely beautiful I truly believe this is one of your best utterly utterly perfect Absolutely excellent work The sign of words that give the fire the heat and passions of love’s desire A gasp, a kiss of shuddered feel of two in now of this when real As whispers say of song once sung among the ring of bells in rung Two entwined hearts will softly beat the sound of charge and not retreat. You KNOW I utterly utterly love it, how do you do it time after time, well, however simply don’t stop. I love it   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Mushy, darling girl.... Rest my wench, for time is nigh to take my leave, to say goodbye Thy chamber above in duty keep as thy lie in wait of deep sleep See what you made me do...... Thanx Mushy!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Barry, simply breathtaking words and images. Hear the sighs coming from Canada? You should!! Thanks for the keeper. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Barry You take me on the most wonderful of journeys through your masterful words. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Breathtakingly beautiful words, Barry...  ~many many hugsLyra |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A strong enduring message my friend. ThisDiamond |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Barry, this is so wonderful. It's the first poem I have read since this surgery, and glad I sat up long enough  Thank you for your beautiful poem on my posting, too. Sandra |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo lovely, sweet friend, may the loons ofrever cry with joy and swarm in flocks of all your dreams come true! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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