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Almost Remembered |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan 
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Almost Remembered On the edge of a think |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lyra Oh, I loved this swirl of you...not lost, I think, but reborn, and beautiful. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Lyra, this is wonderful, sweet friend, this reminded me of Sigmund Freud and what he offered to the world; the advance in psychology and tracing the unconscious of the mind to remembering again! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lyra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Wow Lyra...this reminds me of how I feel early in the morning when I first wake up... Excellent write Madame C.... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Lyra darling heart, girl is simply gorgeous, absolutely perfect. The flow of this river of words is a questing soul. Beautifully written, well done. You know I love this don’t you? Of course you do since you know me sooooooooo well, I could lie you know darling heart I could say, oh you know it’s okay………. But you know this is much much better than just superb don’t you darling? Well you should do it is utterly utterly divine, and I love it as I love you. Take care my sweet friend Love and light darling heart   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Lyra! OH, I do love this one so much! ~Happy Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks for your kind words, Martie... I know that the poem is a bit abstract so I really didn't think anyone would figure it out... But its related to the other poem I posted the other day called "Night People" Its about waking up from a dream and the way it just fades so fast...I always try to reach back and grab it, but all I can ever find is just a worn fragment of it...and I always think about how that dream is "almost remembered"  ~swirly hugsLyra copyright2002 Lyra Nesius "poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks [This message has been edited by Madame Chipmunk (05-17-2002 10:23 PM).] |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
You're close, Noah...its about the psyche but its about letting go of your dreams in the morning when you wake up. I always try to hang on to that last fragment so that I can try to remember the dream...and I never can...but I always say...I "almost remembered" it.  ~waking up hugsLyra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Barry...you figured it out...I know its a bit abstract, so I didn't think anyone would figure it out... When I wake up in the morning I always think I will remember my dreams, but they fade away so fast and I just reach in and try to grab it, but all I get is just a fragment...and so its "almost remembered: I didn't know this was a contest...but I guess you've won!  ~winners hugsLyra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Marsha...thanks so much for replying to this terribly abstract and almost unfiguroutable poem... If you read the above responses, you'll see that its about trying to hold onto my dreams when I wake up. I probably made it a bit too abstract. ~loving hugsLyra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much, Nancy...I'm so glad that you enjoyed it... Were you able to figure it out? I probably shouldn't write in such an abstract manner....this was sort of an experiment. ~sleepy hugsLyra |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Lyra,I like this style for you, nicely done. Sandra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks Sandra...Do you think its too abstract? I'm not used to writing this way, so this was an experiment and I didn't think anyone would understand what I was talking about....or does that really matter? I started out writing sing songy rhyming poems...which I still like to write occasionally, then I dabbled a bit in free verse, but this is the first really abstract one I've ever written...I'm glad you like it and I hope you're feeling a lot better. ~healing hugsLyra |
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