Open Poetry #20 |
Serenity's screen dance (repost for serenity and the rest of the world) |
bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
WOW!!! Oh Michael, this is wonderful, sweet friend, you always write such wonderfully passionate words, I just know Karenb will love this and may even blush reading it! (big huggssssss) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
It's so wonderful to have someone understand. Yes. Happiness...IS...enough... love you yanno... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
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Gut. Ich liebe dich auch -- you helped me more in th' past than y' know of. This is th' least ah could do for yeh. She said burn ... together. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Gut. Ich liebe dich auch Poem rocks but what the heck does that mean? |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
It means learn some German. Sorry, couldn't resist! She said burn ... together. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
You want Serenity to learn some German?? Squirrel you're strange! lol |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Somehow, I saw that comin' ... It means "Good. I love you too." Why I said it in German when I'm actually Polish by descent .... no idea. Yep, I am strange. She said burn ... together. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The night fell hotter still, The moon was like a slivered rill Of running water turning to dust. I sweat so freely, I thought I would rust. I lost so cleanly, I thought I would bust. I watched so dearly, serenity dancing. In lust? No. Tonight, happiness is enough. =========================== Youre not strange...youre a poet a damn fine one at that...and I am loving this love in!! Yes...I remember this screen dance well... we all love when Sen begins to spin...magic happends ...just look at this poem How long can a girl be haunted by you ... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Exactly, Butterfly slippers. Exactly. She said burn ... together. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Good contrasts at work here, bsquirrel, love how you phrase your imagery in this, too. Cor |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks, Corinne. Wow, I can't believe this ol' thing just got bumped up. I thank ye. Mike She said burn ... together. |
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