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The Art of Time |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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She weaves around us seamlessly with no concern for what is wrought a balance act most delicate time stand alone while we cannot. A rose strewn path we walk today but quickly do the flowers die time pushes us past memories all in the barest blink of eye. She slides through hope, past fantasy without least bit of thoughtful care she turns our lives to what was not just reminiscences of where. Time turns her hourglass upon our road of life, we have no part of how she shifts and ebbs and flows time gently paints, sculpting fine art. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
As shadow passes over wall so does the travel of a clock from the moment of our life's call to the sail of souls upon dock. She whispers softly in a tune that lulls us to a bit of sleep as months of pass take of the moon into our dreams of waking keep Born as a child to be now grown as our hourglass does then fill Time stays beside, not once alone til' whence a last beat is then still. Excellent poem Sandra...You always do write so elegantly well.... Thank You... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Ah, but sands will pause in beauty And linger to the trill of dusk In stillness rests the heart estutely Then to cast away this useless husk Sandra, Couldn't help it...this was truly inspirational and an immortal measure of your beautiful talent. ThisDiamond |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Time turns her hourglass upon our road of life, we have no part of how she shifts and ebbs and flows time gently paints, sculpting fine art. Gorgeous writing about a truth which we are helpless to change! Wouldn't it be lovely if we could control time?  ~ healing hugsLyra |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) This is wonderful, sweet friend, and may Art always color all our worlds and answer the many questions we have into possibilities for tomorrow! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I love it when my poems inspire more poems. Thanks, and I will be back answering more soon. It's slow going still. Sandra |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Sandra, Enjoyed the read tonight, keep smiling and time will find space for you to enjoy and remember. Time is but the keeper of the moments that do pass The time we're given passes slowly through the hour glass So wait no longer for your time to come for this is it Your happeness is what you find, not in the pit you sit Sincerely Rick |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sandra, A lovely thoughtful poem, enjoyed. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sandra, finely crafted, sculpted wonder. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CatalinaMoon~ Absolutely wonderful gal~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
A rose strewn path we walk today but quickly do the flowers die time pushes us past memories all in the barest blink of eye. She slides through hope, past fantasy without least bit of thoughtful care she turns our lives to what was not just reminiscences of where. Sandra...This is one of the best I have read from you. Really enjoyed this alot. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
time doesn't stop for anyone or anything..is the thought I get here..so true |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I love your poetry, Sandra... She said burn ... together. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Well written, Sandra, especially the last stanza! I always find pieces of myself in your poetry...you know I know you know  Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound...or a smiling mouth" ~Kahlil Gibran~ [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (05-19-2002 11:53 PM).] |
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