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TwoHeartsOnePen
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state of determination

0 posted 2002-06-08 03:59 PM


here is the beginning of our voice
We are the smile that love brings
whispering secrets to lips
catching those pink swells
and holding them gently between teeth of togetherness.
The curse of distance has not defeated us
as long as we share the same pen
the same love.
We find our strength in ink
until our hands can truly taste of one another.

Distance is the prison for our bodies, but no prison could weaken our passion.

© Copyright 2002 TwoHeartsOnePen - All Rights Reserved
RosePetal
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1 posted 2002-06-08 04:22 PM


"between teeth of togetherness"

I love that line!

WELCOME TO POETRY LAND. You will absolutely love it here.

rp

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2002-06-08 04:23 PM



Welcome to Passions!  A gentle entrance, and I do believe you're going to like it here.  Please, check your E-mail for a special greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.


Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2002-06-08 06:43 PM


Welcome to Passions...
What a lovely entrance you've made!
I know you are going to love it here.
I can't wait to see more of your beautiful work.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Madame Chipmunk
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4 posted 2002-06-08 06:49 PM


Welcome to Passions, 2hearts...
this is a beautiful first post.

I especially loved this

The curse of distance has not defeated us
as long as we share the same pen
the same love.
We find our strength in ink

a beautiful thought.

~ welcoming hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

the_loner_23
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
5 posted 2002-06-08 06:51 PM


That was beautiful. I am new here myself.
icequeen
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6 posted 2002-06-08 06:57 PM


Lovely! I love how you put this together!

Welcome and hope to see more of your work soon

...and her crown was formed by the ice in her eyes

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
7 posted 2002-06-09 02:46 AM


"The curse of distance has not defeated us"

"until our hands can truly taste of one another"

my two fav lines...welcome to passions...helen

Moonlight Romeo
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The heart of you
8 posted 2002-06-10 12:46 PM


There is no distance that can separate love.

Welcome, and well done.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Sven
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9 posted 2002-06-10 04:24 PM


"we find our strength in ink. . . "

like that line. . . well done. . . and welcome. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2002-06-21 09:05 AM


Very nice...James
Zinsser
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11 posted 2002-06-29 11:10 AM


  : )  very  very well done...
bsquirrel
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12 posted 2002-10-03 05:38 PM


One I missed.
Not so any more.

passing shadows
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displaced
13 posted 2002-12-31 02:11 AM


hopeful, and sweet, a longing here
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