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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2002-05-16 02:39 PM


My life is empty
like an empty glass,
wishing a miracle to come,
that somehow
water will spring for eternality.

I have a life,
blessed with surrounding,
but a life
traps in emotions.

With a life so blessed,
I should be excited,
but I'm not motavited.
Somewhere in my heart,
I'm trapped with negative clouds.

Nothing interests me,
cause I feel powerless.
Lack of confidence
make me weak and easily disturbed.

But I have to be strong,
have hope in healing.
And someday, He will set me free.

Eliza Simmons
~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.

© Copyright 2002 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
Jenn Cirrincione
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1 posted 2002-05-16 02:55 PM



~Nothing interests me,
cause I feel powerless.
Lack of confidence
make me weak and easily disturbed~

Oh wow do I understand that. Life takes a lot out of you at times. *sigh*

If you figure it all out, don't forget to share

Jenn

Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving?

aries_luv_ppl
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2 posted 2002-05-16 04:41 PM


I will share with you, if I figure life out

Eliza Simmons
~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2002-05-16 05:50 PM


Enjoyed...James
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4 posted 2002-05-16 09:58 PM


Life is full of ups and downs. You are just caught in a valley right now. The mountain will be there soon. Be ready to climb.
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5 posted 2002-05-16 10:02 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Eliza, this is so very sad, sweet friend, hang in there, for His love will never fail and only He knows why you experience all these emotions and before you know it, your life will be filled with joy and you will grow rich in love forever and ever! (sigh) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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